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I think your translation was great! I would personally recommend uploading the official translations a few days after they're released (I know it would be a bit of a wait, though I would like to reread the chapters). That way the author can make money off of their work. I don't usually advocate for anyone translating something thats been officially licensed in English - but thats your call.
I wasn't ready to let them go yet