The story has a lot of potential and the art is really good but the plot is moving way too fast and sometimes the characters overreact and it feels OOC or just out of place… Like yeah they do have a ‘reason’ for the way they’re acting out but it feels so blown out of proportion/overdramatic. We havent even gotten to know the characters or world well enough yet I really hope as the story continues that the writing/pacing will get better since this is relatively new and its only the first few chapters.
The story has a lot of potential and the art is really good but the plot is moving way too fast and sometimes the characters overreact and it feels OOC or just out of place… Like yeah they do have a ‘reason’ for the way they’re acting out but it feels so blown out of proportion/overdramatic. We havent even gotten to know the characters or world well enough yet I really hope as the story continues that the writing/pacing will get better since this is relatively new and its only the first few chapters.