toruu want to read (All 24)
beta
The story has a lot of potential and the art is really good but the plot is moving way too fast and sometimes the characters overreact and it feels OOC or just out of place… Like yeah they do have a ‘reason’ for the way they’re acting out but it feels so blown out of proportion/overdramatic. We havent even gotten to know the characters or world well enough yet I really hope as the story continues that the writing/pacing will get better since this is relatively new and its only the first few chapters.
I understand the culture there is different and all but like… nora is low key being a creep and being not very great :( like she’s already sort of had some… questionable decisions but this just feels wrong (and this is coming from a woman who has casually hooked up before). I think she really shouldve just been honest with brody and communicated what was bothering her in a nice and honest way and from then on, yk what ever else happens will happen whether its good or not, at least she was true to herself. I know its not everyone’s job to be nice and explain everything and blah blah blah but if a man did this to a woman he’d be seen as a jerk and it’d be wrong and messed up like idk whats up with this nora arc but low key im just starting to get the ick whenever i read the story
Not saying she had to hook up with him, she DEFINITELY could have told him she was no longer interested after explaining why and what happened and im sure it wouldve been less of a negative experience for the both of them and he couldve rebooked his ticket either way.
totally agree. She didn't think it through and jumped at the chance of hooking up with this much younger guy and strung him along. While she knows she has transmittable bacteria. If she were a guy, she'd be torn to shreds for her behaviour. As it is she expects far too much from her partners while being temperamental and vocally unkind nearly all the time.
The whole monologue just felt like she was explaining herself and justifying her reaction actually, (I do that sometimes and I feel like that's what happened), yeah she does seem like a douche here and I forgot about the bacteria part and is messed up , could have been ended things well cause they seem to have talked about quite a few things .
It was a dick move to ghost brody, but what made you think she was a creep? Like what?
Im not even gonna delve into how she basically fetishizes races of people bc thats a whole different can of worms but drooling and getting your rocks off to the idea of taking someone young person’s virginity like some creepy old man and then possibly giving them an infectious virus and wasting their time instead of being honest is more than enough of an explanation I believe.
Understandable lmao
True that, u explained it correctly what I was feeling icky about this all , like yeah fetishization of different races and damn it def felt like some creepy old man and wanting to take virginity thing , currently idk what to make of her , especially when so much of this focuses on her and her sexuality