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Am I the only one who wants Ellen to use her powers more? She sort of feels like a background character at times—not even a side character—even though she’s the FL. I’m kind of disappointed with Ellen’s impact on the story despite it supposedly being her own. Sure, she has some cool powers, but she rarely makes use of them and the story tends to go stale.
I have read plenty of stories with genres like this one, but I feel like this isn’t done as tastefully as most of those. I have just read chapter 67 and I’ve been reading this story since it first started being uploaded on here, so I feel like I should have a decent grasp of the story, its flow, and the way the characters interact.
In my opinion, the plot could have been much better written to make a more impactful story. I know many of the characters are flawed on purpose, but there are so many issues that haven’t been addressed (and probably never will be). It’s disappointing, mainly because I kept hoping for the story to get better and just more problems keep stacking up as time goes on.
I think I have to bow out on this one. (T﹏T) Good luck to everyone still reading this manga! I really, really hope it improves…