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Keith's development is not there y'all- it's not even fast character development bc you have to do it right for it to be an actual development- WHAT THIS IS - is throwing away a character's personality that didn't appeal to the audience, not addressing their flaws & pretending they didn't exist, & replacing it with something that would be closer to the perfect man. An action scene where he acts like the good clone of himself won't erase his actions. Where did the evil clone go?
Keith doesn't deserve to end up with Yeonwoo & Yoenwoo will only look like a naive victim to me until we see Keith address everything he had done until now & we see him STRUGGLE to change but overcome it.- BC RN THIS STORY SEEMS LIKE A WILD DREAM WHICH YOU FORGET HALF OF AFTER WAKING UP. I WANTED TO ACTUALLY PAY THR ARTIST BC OF HOW GOOD THE ART STYLE IS & TIP AN EXTRA BUT I'M KIND OF GLAD I DIDN'T DO IT FOR THIS.
Ik that most ppl read this for fun- BUT I FEEL CHEATED & TRICKED- THAT'S WHY I'M WRITING THIS.
2021-02-20 13:58 marked
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2. Was Keith's sexism addressed or forgotten and throw aside for the sake of the relationship actually working? Bc the man literally assaulted the omega and basically called him a whore in nature like 3-4 chapters ago & the sudden switch in him just doesn't sit right with me ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭ I NEED TO KNOW
2021-02-16 12:46 marked
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2021-01-26 23:02 marked
IF YOU'R LOOKING FOR A PROPER PLOT- THIS IS NOT WORTH YOUR TIME- I was tric