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Idk, the seme's kinda meh. I feel like it is fast-paced and there's no "click" moment, just force & gaslighting lmao. Skl uwu
There DO seem to be quite a few moments that show scenes being portrayed too quick. That can have quite the impact on how the story reads, so this results in feeling to rushed and random at times even.
Not really sure about the gaslighting bit and such but the mini-jumps in scenes without letting emotions or such rise and settle is something that bothers me most in stories.
I don’t know, this chapter heals a part of me