beta
Its a cute story but lacks in some things. i feel like the development of this became stagnant the moment brown hair boy's rejection was completely ignored.
Its like It didnt even happen!
but fr, i was just trying to make things make sense in my head.
From the start the own story gives us subtle signals that Brown hair kid and black hair are to be endgame!!
In a sense i get why he ends up with grey hair kid. Hes a naive kid in his "First love", the one we dont know how deal with, and fall prisioner of our feelings. Hes discovering himself... Of course he wouldnt make the right choice at the first time, we never do.
Still, It would be lovely If there was a sequence to this! i still find the story kinda ass, and yes, im trying to make things haver a sense so i dont feel bad for wasting my time reading this.