I think It was totally unecessary anything related to Daniel. Like, why??
It was a total waste of chapters. Like you wasted 5 chapters to say that this mf took advantage of him TWICE and all Helena gets is a bitch slaps in the face? Be so fr
Those chapters could be used to dive in this limbo that Jayden is in, about the sadness of the loss and the way that Diego slowly takes place.
This was too rushed, they didnt even really Interact much, i belive that taking in consideration the psichological state that Jayden was in, If this was in a slower pace, It would be chefs Kiss!
This story really surprised me, at First i tought It would be more directed to the main couple relationship as manu other stories, mainly by how the author drew yeong-do naked or in very questionable positions, but i see that with Very different eyes now. In my opinion yeong-do is the depiction of vulnerability, not by strenght but of allowing yourself to be free of judgment, his character definitely broke Yuju s view, their connection transcends the moment theyre in, wich is lovely, Yuju deserved to live free from such dark past, the saved (Yeong-do) saves the savior (Yuju)
Now, the ending was something that got my Brian going back and forth, everything here was executed in excellence, and i think that the fast pace, lack of rythim, and the fact that some parts are just left there for us to wonder are things that give such a unique character for the story. It seemed Very intentional, all of It. So the end leaves the bitter taste of the fact that this is a VERY REAL and SADLY common story: the abuser doesnt get caught. Even If It is fiction, the reality of the real world slipped in this work and got us the opportunity to think about the loss. The objectification of life and the dehumanization of people, when you TAKE something from a person that makes them human (their "innocence") they stop being a human being. They become something else entirely.
Anyway my brain is still running laps trying to digest all, sorry for the big text. This was a very good read!
Thanks, this ruined my year now imma ugly cry whenever i remember it
Five stars
Yall are blind If you think grey hair guy is gentle or sum imma just say: hes def crazyyy, and i bet hes crazyer then the other top
He definitely is a mass murderer or some shit im just waiting for them to reveal it
yah he prob went to prison for something fucked up too
WE KNOW DEEP INSIDE
MC is kinda crazy, but i can see where It comes from. Still, i wish there was a third character that ACTUALLY gave a fuck about the MC and not that bitch ass purple-doo mf.
Anyway, im loving It. I hope purple hair gets what Helena deserves tho
Queen i agree
Im BAWLING my eyes out. SO. CUTE. So delicate, tender, sweet. I wish there was more, but i dont need any. They live in my Wonderland 4ever
Has a good start but gets boring really fast, story doesn't make much sense, its all over the place :/
I mean its not bad but not THAT good either.
Oh well â•®(￣▽￣)â•
Its a cute story but lacks in some things. i feel like the development of this became stagnant the moment brown hair boy's rejection was completely ignored.
Its like It didnt even happen!
but fr, i was just trying to make things make sense in my head.
From the start the own story gives us subtle signals that Brown hair kid and black hair are to be endgame!!
In a sense i get why he ends up with grey hair kid. Hes a naive kid in his "First love", the one we dont know how deal with, and fall prisioner of our feelings. Hes discovering himself... Of course he wouldnt make the right choice at the first time, we never do.
Still, It would be lovely If there was a sequence to this! i still find the story kinda ass, and yes, im trying to make things haver a sense so i dont feel bad for wasting my time reading this.
Bestie it’s okay, I totally agree. Beside the two other “MLs” (the mcs best friend and childhood friend) being a total joke, he developed strong relationships with the black haired guy and the president (if i remember correctly, that’s the gray haired guy right?) But after the fall out of MC and president due to a tiring miscommunication trope, he becomes attached to the hip with black haired guy and they both develop really well as characters.
But instead of using this as a way for him to move on from his many shitty crushes and awful people around him, no no, let’s have him forgive everything and run back to the president after avoiding him for so long. It’s like he used black haired to feel better, and then returned to his one true love once he was okay again. What’ll happen next time they misunderstand each other?
Now I’m not saying that they don’t fit each other but the author knew damn well what they were doing when they tried tricking us. And I was tricked. And I’m so pissed. I dropped it before the MC ended up with the president because I refuse to get tricked any further.
40 chapters of nothing bffr idk what these men like so much about Ian, all he knows is to be sad about the past and take dick, i mean, i can see why TJ likes him since they have survived such rough experiences togheter, but Jo, boy wtf are u doin obsessin over that guy they are so bland, 0 chemestry
lol Ian is so boring to me Ian and Jo have zero chemistry like none
Welp
You're so right I feel like kissing you pookie. You my soulmate
Fr i need this hiatus to be over rn, i feel my inner emo alpha daddy wolf coming out... And It may be very very dangerous... AHHG I FEEL THE TRANSFORMATION COMING AAAAAHJH