this was nice!! the leads' chemistry was fun to witness bloom into more.
towards the end i started to get frustrated with the miscommunication and dillon's one sided expectations of a clueless cedric, but it was surprisingly resolved quickly!
personally i think the plot twist at the end made the whole theme of [creating your own destiny/writing your own story and not being shackled to plot] prior to it meaningless :( the fact that she was adeline this whole time and not a reincarnator was unnecessary given how her inner conflicts and anxieties about stealing og fl's spot was built up from the start. yeaaaah i'll forget about that part LOL
overall this was a rly rly fun read! i especially loved the start of season 3 when she pointed the gun lmfao. dillon is a Character for sure. refreshing and enjoyable to read!
can someone spoil the whole thing i dont care if its big and will ruin the experience i wanna Know. what happens til the end. and i'm too impatient to read the novel. if you hate spoilers don't interact thanks!!
i love that ml's first reaction to mc's delivery is fear! people tend to gloss over how truly scary and life-threatening a pregnancy is for the woman. ml feeling guilty and fearing for mc's life was a breathhhhh of fresh air. it's realistic, and shows how much he loves and values mc!! i like how the author approached this part :)))
this is soooo cute it def feels like something they'd do.
LOLOLOL same vibes as may i punch you your highness or something
i thought this would be fun since there's boypussy and big boobs and self penetration (detached dick lol), but the uke is so annoying it's pissing me off. so prideful, he literally sees seme as a human dildo with no regard for his feelings. no remorse whatsoever for hurting him both emotionally and physically for squeezing him dry!!! he's a college student with deadlines to finish and all uke can think about is getting fucked by him since he can't accept the fact that he likes bottoming and won't try other methods outside of seme. and seme is such a pushover getting thrown around by uke when it's obvious uke is the one with more needs in the relationship. leverage that shit!!
the sex is nice but the dialogue & thoughts attached to it is a no from me. so far, there's no payoff from all the mess that's happening for me to see this as worth continuing
i'm getting too invested. and not in a good way
Bruv i meant to like anyways LMAO mood af. Yechan is the human equivalent of a red flag you can't look away from. The audacity of this man is astronomical.
But lowkey... that's the point? The story is basically taking the "annoying uke" trope and dialing it up to 100 until he *has* to faceplant into character development. You're not supposed to like him right now, you're supposed to be screaming at Seokjun to leverage that D and run.
And you're totally right, Seokjun is a pushover... but the leverage is literally in his pants and he's finally starting to realize it.
The payoff isn't gonna be a cute confession, it's gonna be Yechan's ego getting absolutely obliterated when he finally admits he needs Seokjun. But fr if the vibes are too rancid rn, no shame in dropping it. Life's too short for fictional men who ruin your peace. Maybe let it marinate and check back later to see if Yechan has been humbled.
hii you're right LOL i fell right into the author's hands of wanting the audience to hateeee yechan's ass i guess that's proof of how good they are at creating such characters for this kind of story!
and yechan's obliterated ego sounds soo good for this. need him like Actually begging for seokjin and seokjin just not having it (for a while yk). you made sm sense thanks for creating a discussion w me XD i think i started this story a bittt too early in their development so it's just a waiting game for each chapter right in the middle of their mess before any delicious payoff. aahhhhh i will marinate this instead, idt i'm patient enough!! THANK U
i liked it and i was so hooked at first by the suspense and the angst but the ending did feel draggy and i wish we saw how their prison sentence went! but overall it was nice to have read this
i skipped to ch 90 after reading the officials and WOW that art style change. so delicious.
i hope the ages and whatnot are cleared up throughout the story. but in the first place the fact that this is a high school setting is already convoluted in itself like... at least be 24 LMFAO
looking forward to reading the official trans!! thanks akumakira