wtf is wrong with the dukes hands?? the hand to face ratio goes crazy.
her boobs are bigger than her godamn head, i’ve been raised by women with huge chiichiis, but huge boobs arent perky they droop (if their natural), hers just levitate it’s throwing me off.
then progressively the black haired dudes body to face ratio is like sending me at moments.
chapter 22 showcases all these artistic errors, like the huge hands compared to tiny heads on the men (duke and paladin) then in comparison to her huge assets and super thin arms nd face. its just, idk, the artist needs some constructive criticism from another actual artist
hey, at least the peewees are all very diverse and somewhat anatomically accurate ??
i think he’s giving way too much info and amo on WHY he’s hurt. make that man fumble and speculate on what he did that was wrong, just a couple words like “why this what you wanted no?” and end it there. leave that man struggling to figure out and piece it by his lonesome what a trash bag he’s been and is.
THIS FOR THE LADIES OUT THERE TOO!! talk less, have discernment and decide if talking more makes you seem desperate and emotional or if talking less is the way to go. u got this bbs
everyone hating on all the other stories besides the vampire ones are LAMEEEEEEEEEE. ur LAME. like all these mini stories are so introspective and genuinely relevant to current society.
story 1 & 2 and perfect parallels, story 1 they have no desire left, story 2 is when there is so much desiring and never being satisfied.
story 3 continues on that route of just the genuine spiral of having this superficial desire and paranoia of losing it like story 2 had but far more realistic and relatable (to some, DEFINITELY not me)
story 4 isnt finished yet at this time and it seems to continue in this spiral of desire to destroy, which seems to continue on with story 3 where she is self destructive and paranoid but story 4 isnt paranoid just destructive to herself and everyone around her (assumingly)
Pleaaaseeeee!!! What's so annoying is, this is clearly a collection of mini stories, those vampires aren't coming back. If you don't like the new stories just stop reading or re-read the one you like. They be on the 4th story and still b*tching about the first one like ugh get a grip
And the stories are soo soo good, it's amazing how the author captured the emotions of the characters. From the greed, to the obsession it was amazingly done
this!! the vampires arent coming back, u saw it by the next chapter after it ended and should have the common sense from the STORY DESCRIPTION that its short stories. i hate bitching and complaining from ppl who can easily just leave or exit out
right!! its executed flawlessly from getting to see firsthand on maybe why the vampires probably felt so disgusted by humans with story 2 and her behaviour and literal never ending dissatisfaction.
and story 3 made ME anxious and actually a lot more introspective because in middle school i had some similar habits and i’ve had BPD friends who behaved the EXACT same way and it actually made me think about what they’re going through even if it was insufferable at times!
its so so good! tell me how u felt girl !
Omg righttt??, the third story made me so anxious too but it has to be my favourite so far. I was really scared about what her paranoia would make her do, and even though I've never experienced paranoia to that level the Mc was also pretty relatable. And I've been there too, overthinking about my boyfriend and his past relationships, wondering if he really loves me and all that and even watching videos on YouTube saying we belong together(how embarrassing, we ended up breaking up anyway). The current story is so interesting too, I wonder what our Mc is really feeling deep down and what her true intentions with the cleaner is. I didn't think I'd stick around for this long, but wow I really can't wait to see more.
THANK. YOU.
No literally lmaooo I can’t believe ppl are still asking when they’re coming back. Like this is clearly an anthology series
i somewhat pitied pinkie for yk getting gang raped, however, as evil as it sounds, in context it makes sense, she literally had it coming. she intended to have that gang literally rape her sister and instead it happened to her which sounds so bad but it was a backfire.
i felt bad because its a woman’s worst nightmare ONLY for her to rape the dude. idgaf if he’s a big buff handsome dude she’s loved for so long. he was blasted drunk and clearly has never wanted her and only slept with her mistaking her for ‘vivi’
and she was FULLY AWARE of this. it’s not ooh nonchalant. she has nearly had her sister gang raped and literally raped this man. i found them equally terrible but this is evidence of a genuinely evil woman and an easily manipulated foolish man, he’s an ass but he’s also a victim.
what the FUCK
Karma is real after all. I know someone who had beef with another girl. They were relatives.
A like started beefing with B for no reason. B never did anything to A. Oneday, A like drove her car and almost hit B. She was laughing and saying how B would break her leg and she deserved it. A few months later, A got ran over by a car. Her leg is now broken forever and she has to use a cane to walk.
oooh that felt good to hear about
chapter 2, jaekyung’s previous partner was desperate to stay with him and even mentioned how good his head was and how their physically compatible. jaekyung was bored and unsatisfied which caused this whole thing with him calling over dan for the first time. plus it was dan’s first time having sex (presumably with a dude?)
chapter 63, jaekyung gives head for the first time, and he gives this head specifically because he wants to prove that they’re physically (sexually) compatible. plus he wants to keep dan (less of wants to stay WITH dan like his previous partner but more so KEEP dan).
in whole it seems like jaekyung has been put in the same position as his ex partner but with dan (minus him shoving his ex partners face into a wall). its like his direct karma and parallel. ik its dumb to analyze a bl smut but its just so entertaining
ooohhhh you're on to something
i just know kim dan not giving a fuck is gonna hurt him SO bad and plus kim dan said he would end it there. ooh this gonna backfire in his face and he’ll chew his damn “don’t regret this” words tf up! MWAHAHAHAHAH
yo, Doya lowkey looks like he’s based off of Ricky, i’m going insane the face card eatsss
the last time they talked she asked “WHY do you even like me?” and i think 3 answers that question!
ik people are gonna say its SA which it is, im certain they will work it out though, i think the author is trying to portray inexperienced and just poorly done bdsm on purpose, like that it wasnt the way to go bla bla bla.
he was a jerk but was a one time moment and he stopped, it sucked to see but i understand the message being portrayed, and dont say that it wasnt necessary for the manhwa, its a BDSM smut manhwa, SA is typically tied to the stigma around that so as long as the chapter after are written well i assume all will be well.
As an expirenced kinkster and member of the BDSM community I can soundly say...it wasn't necessary. Rape isn't necessary just because BDSM is involved, that's an extremely disturbing opinion.
I totally totally get what your saying I am NOT saying rape is a necessary part of BDSM, its not even accepted in the community typically.
But it IS part of the stigma surrounding BDSM, if the author plays their cards well they can be able to portray a message of “rape is NOT bdsm and this was a mistake of the characters, lets see how they get past this” you took my comment, took it as me saying rape was a necessity, and immediately went into social justice warrior mode rather than any nuance.
im saying that hard topics in stories when written well can be a good thing, and this issue being brought up in a smut could be a great way to teach the audience consuming it.
actually i reread my OG comment and I actually take back the animosity in my first response. I think my original comment was too dismissive and didnt accurately portray what I was trying to get across. Sorry abt the animosity in the second paragraph of my response
i said what i said ho
Ho u are so real for that
thx for ur support ho