This is okay, this is fine. Im fucking crying and I wish the next update would come soon but its okay :D. This is so good wha-
alr dont worry bro idk why I fucking cried for a half hour. My emotions are wilding on me. :,C I agree
Biggest Pet Peeve is when a top does literally nothing to show their genuine love for the bottom. What the fuck did he do to make you love him? If this was a purely s3x related thing i wouldnt have minded but they explicitly said they fell in love. Bitch wheree. I wanted the bottom to get more angry at the top, it jus dont make sense to me. Apart from the XXX scenes, this just kinda pissed me off. But read it if you like hot n spicy.
The top said that they've met before because he said the lines, "You don't remember me?" Or something like that when they first came in contact. But yea, I understand
I agree with yah. There’s been so many series that kind of had a good plot but the artist/author failed to live up to it (ehhhm gotta throw it out cuz I had high hope: K’s secret) but instead focus more appealing to sexual pleasures 95% of the story than the real relatable reason/ truths behind why someone ACTUALLY loves another.
The first story- why was everyone so... toxic? I get yiyi risked his family life for him but to stalk the new lover n try to break them up? I loved him in the end but- Same thing with the main couple. Its really not okay to use someone as a stepping stone- even if the someone happens to be a sociopathic sister(who I still believe deserves a more serious punishment or a better fleshed out back story to make more sense of her actions). And the uke? Did he just say its perfectly fine for the sisters boyfriend to cheat cause he liked him first? The ending was kinda cute, fine, but the characters need a therapy session-
This was written well to the point where the muthafucking rapists got beat up to the brink of death, but it couldve had a longer storyline
╮(￣▽￣)╭ right
It had it's good parts n bad parts but all in all, it was really good. First couple was still my all-time favourite tho. When Shiro was worrying over the fact that he will outlive his mate, I almost cried. I hope they live happily in the future! Even if it is fiction, I can't help but feel for them.
The first and the last story were adorable but the second story- ik its my own fault for disregarding the "yandere" tag but- Its so messed up I-
I love these two so much They somehow manage to be super fucking cute n super fucking smexy at the same time
Real fucking cute, fine, I'm glad they're happy, I'm glad everyone has recovered B U T. ARE WE FORGETTING THE FACT THAT THIS PERVERTED MANIPULATOR WAS LEFT UNSCATHED? HE'S JUST GONNA KEEP DOING THE SAME FUCKING THING?? I wanted to see him absolutely break down. beat him up etc. Maybe it's just my anger issues but honestly, he needed more of a beating. I would've given this 5 stars if I wasn't so damn annoyed at the end. but still super fluffy :D
Should i continue this? I wanna punch the fucking seme in the face n i really want to see him cry. If some can tell me whether or not the uke gets really mad along the road and doesnt come back for forgiveness please tell me. I hate it when the semes are assholes and the uke falls for nothing
Don't continue
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