Awi want to read (All 715)
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The only unnecessary part was him looking and acting as a child. I know he’s a dragon but still Taehyuk didn’t know about in the beginning and thought he’s a child and also treat him as one. It was a little uncomfortable to see it. Overall it’s good story
exactly this, it all felt like a "and here is the writers barely disguised fetish" type nonsense... if hes a dragon theres no point into making him a child .... grooming is still grooming :/ it felt like a weird tacked on thing to an already good story
Frrr like we GET IT he raised him a long time ago but turning him into a child in the last two chapters was unnecessary, especially after seeing them wildly fuck like what ??
Yeah...that "healing his literal inner child" bit was uncomfy—and I've read some pretty fked up shit.
It was like finding a boiled egg in your ice cream. It's not the parts themselves but the timing.
After seeing how ml looks with new arts style idk if I can continue this .. they simplified him af