Someone get this artist a new writer her art style is too beautiful to be wasted on a story like this
Bro like
Where’s the plot
What’s the conflict?? Sexual tension??? He hasn’t nutted for so long he got clarity JUST now after two nuttings?
And dude look 6 years realising he hates Hotaru cause he loves *cough*isobsessedwith*cough* Hotaru?
Look, I liked the scene where he’s walking down the road his insecurities and whatever he’s running from’s come flooding at him. That was a moment.
But that was the only moment The author has the timing going so wrong lol like what have they been doing for 6 years. There’s space and time in writing.
And we literally cringed through the first 3 chapters. It was disgusting to read them.
(I did because I just wanted to find out wtf was happening, and the art probably was probably what tricked me into investing)
WHEN IS IT MY TURNNNNNNNN