Never heard of the original source but this was so cute omg
Someone get this artist a new writer her art style is too beautiful to be wasted on a story like this
You know sometimes they also write their on story right. And yes not everyone is talented in writing stories, maybe their talent is only in the field of drawing lol
Whatever it turns out to be, I also hope this artist get a better writer than whoever wrote this plot ☠
Bro like
Where’s the plot
What’s the conflict?? Sexual tension??? He hasn’t nutted for so long he got clarity JUST now after two nuttings?
And dude look 6 years realising he hates Hotaru cause he loves *cough*isobsessedwith*cough* Hotaru?
Look, I liked the scene where he’s walking down the road his insecurities and whatever he’s running from’s come flooding at him. That was a moment.
But that was the only moment The author has the timing going so wrong lol like what have they been doing for 6 years. There’s space and time in writing.
And we literally cringed through the first 3 chapters. It was disgusting to read them.
(I did because I just wanted to find out wtf was happening, and the art probably was probably what tricked me into investing)
This shit is so corny oh my gawwwwd
Not hating btw I’m the bitch stupid enough to keep reading it lmao
same, i don't know how I have been reading all of these chapters... i got the ick every single one of them, but here I am lol
The rapid downfall of this storyline needs to be studied like how did we get here