The story and plot were great. "Don't you know I'm a mess too?" was a nice confession, it fit well with the established relationship dynamic. <3 I'm sad the ending was just kind of dropped on us, and the idealistic side of me was hoping their marks would change (although I didn't really expect it ig) Overall I loved the story, but WHY was the last scene of the story a light confession and what seemed like uncomfortable sex? The whole time I was thinking 'why is he still smoking?' LMFAO
Was the dad saying the kid was a bad friend for MC because he got attacked? Or did he have someone break his arm so MC wouldn't be his friend? Or was that a young version of the MC? idk lol
The story and plot were great. "Don't you know I'm a mess too?" was a nice confession, it fit well with the established relationship dynamic. <3 I'm sad the ending was just kind of dropped on us, and the idealistic side of me was hoping their marks would change (although I didn't really expect it ig) Overall I loved the story, but WHY was the last scene of the story a light confession and what seemed like uncomfortable sex? The whole time I was thinking 'why is he still smoking?' LMFAO