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I think it’s really insane that her behavior a good thing first of all. I think it’s mainly due to the fact that there’s not a lot of female leads sticking it back to the male leads, but her behavior is extremely concerning because she beats disobedience out of everyone who wrong her, but it seems as a good thing because of people doing it, which is still concerning. Whenever she handles werewolves, I always have to look away because she just physically beats him up and says obey me or else and they love her for. the only smart one is a monster so no one listens to him, but he is right They shouldn’t have bought monsters at the end because it’s not like human society like them. But my biggest I have with the overall series her relationship with her brother because at no point in time should he start liking her.
I understand he’s a stalker, and she deals with that by turning him into a rabbit and emotionally and mentally scarring him And further emotionally embarrasses him by having the person he’s been obsessed with say leave me the fuck alone which he deserved, but still rough and then she breaks his treasured gun which he then cries over. At no point in time should he start respecting her out of this? He should start avoiding/being scared of her. They should not lead to healthy sibling relationship because this is not a healthy sibling relationship. He shouldn’t fuck with her after this, and this should be a lesson for her telling her that she can’t break the ML Otherwise, there will be consequences to her actions just like there are consequences to their actions. Maybe this could bring up insecurities and Jake like it would be so much more interesting to explore that instead of what we got. He should’ve abandoned the title to her like he did in this but without guiding her or maybe he could’ve if she actually apologized instead of just being like well I guess I’ll get you a gun. Every male character shouldn’t have turned around and started falling in love with her because “she was the only one who stood up to me” She didn’t stand up to you, she beat the shit out of you.
Her relationship with nine is whatever I don’t really care for him because I thought his personality was bland, but his brother was right about him which is insane because he acts innocent but he’s scary. He’s a scary person and he uses that to actively threaten multiple people.
There are so much to like about the concept of this, but the execution left much to be desired. I also think the fact that all of the non-main characters ended single was a bit disappointing. I’m not saying that they deserve a partner, but they deserve to be happy, and I don’t think any of the main male leads are truly happy at the end.