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Yea i like hate yearning make up sex, but the new chapter screams pornhub material. Small disclaimer, I’m not about to bitch about the story but damn the chasing arc (which should’ve been peak considering the story premise) is SO bad. It’s rushed, mid, and worse, she made both the leads unrecognizable. I didn’t particularly like JKY’s attitude but at the very least, I got where his assholeness come from. This arc could’ve been the part where everyone starts talking about rethinking their opinions on JKY but no. Anyways d next paragraph is just me nitpicking (I can’t help it if it’s too goofy)
(62-63) I wish Mingwa put more attention to the little details (i.e., their expressions and the atmosphere) rather than teleporting Dan’s clothes elsewhere after saying that all JKY wants is his body (Ig that’s why most small bl creators are growing on me this year cs they get it). Didn’t know that being su!cidal made Dan know he was fine shyt all along damn, almost didn’t recognize my deer beauty child (why’d you make him ooc just for this ). Next thing we know, it’s zoomed in to JKY’s rock hard cock and saying yes to it after obviously getting offended by what Dan said lmao (what a good boy?). As a follower from Day 1, I expected him to bitch about it a bit more while enduring a hard-on or just idk make up anything besides THAT. God, these recent chapters are sooo unserious