Napaka bullshit ng story, illogical patterns ng reasoning sa dynamic behavior ng characters sa roles nila. Parang pinipilit masyado ng author yung mga little scenes na dapat kailangan coherent para mag make sense yung bigger plot ng story. Puros SA si ml, maraming opportunities na sana pwede lumayas siya, pero pota the little damsel he is- syempre forda plot. Tho, saka lang magmamake up yung whole story sa ending kasi it is not all about the happy ending we want as readers but an ending that feels secluded to attach the oriental making from the themes of the story- which is destiny.
The story line is getting you nowhere, messy plots of events, ugly ass plots fr. Wala ka ng mapapala dito na maganda. As in parang pinipilit yung shit ng manwha.