the side character stories don't bother me when they are done right. This story failed to make smooth transitions all around. The final getting together for the main was lackluster, rushed af and so then it's open season for criticism. Had the writer done the main couple justice and gave them enough time for their coming together, people wouldn't have so much room to complain. But it didn't happen Yuyang kind of got of easy because she didn't develop it properly. It seemed rushed and then she cuts of straight to another couple. It seems choppy. Then, I'm going to ask why bother with other couples if you're not going to develop them properly and they don't end up together. I was highly invested in uncle Phan and the younger red headed cutie. Now just seems like she used them for Yuyang to hear it from the red cutie which I was going to look in the other direction. This writer left herself wide open for this story to be dismantled. Just looks sloppy... ╮(￣▽￣)╭
He's still hung up on an ex that left you with a massive debt which you were going through hell to pay in Chapter 2 so you can't leave? No thanks! (︶︿︶)＝凸
I think you should continue cause it's worth it(๑•ㅂ•)و✧
Tbh, it's going so fast my head and eyes can't keep up! Lol I'm relieved that Gok chose to become a vampire. Watching Yibin break like that hurt something awful deep in my soul. I can understand him not wanting to get close because first of what happened with that chick and second because he would always be alone. Sigh of relief! (▰˘◡˘▰)...Their son Hwa is a 12 course meal and obviously having some fun! ;) His seme aura is real and I hope his story is just as compelling as his parents.
While everyone is drooling over the rooster chick(Hot AF), I'm here stressing my hair out that while Dojin got thoroughly fucked out by that evil side chick, my baby daddy is weakened and dying in some lake?! I feel betrayed and I'm not Yellow Dragon! (I don't want to be him but under him) He couldn't tell that wasn't him! Just that something was off! Gah! Geez...Lol...And I'm still a little lost on what realm is the real world. At this point I won't be surprised if it is in the future! (⊙…⊙ )...I'm not hating on Dojin btw before I get jumped through the computer...It's just one of my personal triggers.
Yeah that caught me off guard ut I'm not gonna think to much about it... I wonder if they're gonna bring it up.
I thought the same!! jejejjeje
oh my, i just cant imagine Dojin reaction after that. like, he is going to tell yellow dragon... oh my, poor babies:( both fooled by that monster /TДT)/ i want to slap her so hard for that.
well he did think many times that "he feel like a stranger" but still had sex with him.....like wtf dude! (〜￣△￣)〜 if someone feel like a fucking stranger, you don't need to have sex with them omg!
╮(￣▽￣)╭ so true! lol
It's the second day after reading it and I still feel salty! (〜￣△￣)〜 Lol...That is something I would be appreciate if they do.
Great minds suffer alike! ┗( T﹏T )┛
I hope he reacts and the subject doesn't get skated over. That would be another trigger!
#－.－) Lol
Exactly! Everything felt off to him including his family yet he deemed to get railroaded over and over without mercy. I was expecting more from him after everything Yellow Dragon has done for him. ヽ(`Д´)ﾉ But I sort of get it. Sigh...
I forgot to add. Somehow I doubt Yellow Dragon has or ever will be fooled by anyone. I truly believe he would know right away. He is devoted to Dojin without a doubt including suffering over and over again so Dojin doesn't die.
same I didn't think I feel that salty about this shit, but I do ヽ(`Д´)ﾉ
I know right? it just didn't make any sense at all! ヽ(`Д´)ﾉ(╯°Д °)╯╧╧ I hate this MC now
but, guys, we cant blame dojin:( he doesnt have "superpowers", there would be no way for him to know it wasnt yellow dragon... yes, he did say something was off, but i mean... everything is off right now? he is leaving in someone's dream, that is so strange. poor baby, i think he will feel so bad. he didnt cheat on yellow dragon, but i bet he'll think he did.（/TДT)/
that snake must die!!! !
i forgot to add, but, if we think logically, dojin was raped. i mean, the sex with yellow dragon was consensual, but not with that lady. i'm devastated now when i think about that, because he is just a victim.... I know you are salty (I understand that!! i really do!!!), but poor baby, he didnt know... please, dont blame him, guys ╥﹏╥
I don't blame him cause he didn't know, I just salty cause he know something was OFF! he know it is, he felt it. and he felt he was a fucking stranger, he said so himself in the chapter. it's not something I made up or created myself cause I want to hate the MC. it something he said in his mind by himself, so yeas common sense say "if something feel off, don't have sex with them" or at least be careful from them (╯°Д °)╯╧╧
god I"m salty, sorry about it
Idk why you are so salty. He didn't know, even if he thought sth was off. Besides what he could do? He is much weaker
It's ok honey. We'll be salty together. Although I'm not so angry with Dojin but I do want some type of regret and discussion over it or I'll snap at the writer. Lol
I don't hate Dojin as much as I hate the act. I just want some type of acknowledgement so that I won't resent him. I hope the writer does Dojin and Yellow dragon's relationship/bond justice or I won't be happy. （￣へ￣）Lol
I know exactly how you feel ლ(´ڡ`ლ) and he even enjoyed it a lot! jejejejejeje
I just explain why I am salty, so what if he didn't know. we still feel things and base on that we still act, and he felt very strongly that he was a STRANGER! but he choose to ignore it. why can't he do the same and say NO TO THE SEX BS?! if he felt something was off, dude, don't just go to bed with him and let him fuck you!! (╯°Д °)╯╧╧
yeas let's do that, be salty together ╥﹏╥ at least we won't be alone now
the fact he enjoy it, despite feeling he was a stranger to him, even more, pisses me off and make me even more salty about him and the act that don't make sense（/TДT)/
I bet the author will ignore it and say it never happens now.
Well I saw the raws and........
I don't understand why, Dojin explained that the desires manifest in Yooshin because he's in a dream, something is always off when Dojin comes back and it's up to him to find out what's off. Although it was consensual, he didn't know that woman was manipulating him so it can be considered rape. Of course, if they don't bring any acknowledgement anyways, no one has a right to snap at the writer when YOU are the one who should be grateful this is even being translated and posted on mangago. Even if he felt he was a stranger, that still didn't give him enough excuse to stop having sex with him because he felt familiar but all too different. It can be considered rape in its own way.
Anyways, although he said Yooshin felt like a stranger, this cannot be considered cheating but sex because Dojin WAS having sex with the actual Yellow Dragon in a dream but the Yellow Dragon was weak so he lost control of himself to that Lotus women. I'm sure Yellow Dragon knows what happened since it was his dream and they both were being manipulated and taken advantage of, so yes you honestly have no reason to be salty..
I honestly think Dojin might talk about it but it won't be too serious. Like he'll feel really bad tho maybe... just a theory. Although when you think about it... it's better than Dojin getting married and having children with someone and YDs all alone.
so you basically saying...having sex with someone you strongly feel is a STRANGER is not a big deal and not consider cheating despite it clearly is. only from the fact he felt he is doing it with a fucking STRANGER
omg XD I guess you okay with doing it with a stranger I guess. I think it's wrong and not make any sense at all.
and no I have all the reasons to be salty, cause it's dumb and don't make any fucking sense!
I honestly don't care, if he talks about it or not or feel guilty about it or not. I hope this dragon will found a new man to love instead XD but it won't happen (it this sort of cliche story after all) so I just left here feeling like this.
honestly, I will be much happier if YD will end up alone now, it is better then...well this.
first, we have all the right to feel what we feel after reading a story. it is a fact and no you can't tell reader's not to feel how they are feeling anon. and who are you to tell people they not allowed to feel how they are about a sorting character? and yeas I have all the right not to like/feel salty about any character I want. if you don't like it, you can leave the chat.
second, I didn't talk about that women or what she did. I only talk about how little sense it was for him to just roll with it and do it with someone he feel is a stranger to him. that by the way, it wasn't YD. if they don't talk about how little sense it was, which I doubt they would talk about, only show how bad the writing is and how little common sense it have. and yeas it can annoy people. it wasn't rape cause the MC agree to have sex with someone that feels like a stranger to him, cause he is that much dumb and has no common sense ╮(￣▽￣)╭
how one sided, one dimentional some of you are. Siran is jealous and frustrated. Someone you desire, albeit have pursued them a bit wrongly, only comes to you for a favor, won't open up to you, has put you through the floor, says they want nothing from you, how would you feel? He is an alpha wolf who has massive pressure as a leader that wants to be together with a fox. (stigma too) I am not saying he's right either but see it from his perspective. Ho kissed him first so why are you all acting like he's wrong for kissing Ho back. Conversation, trust, understanding, communication is a TWO way street. Hold someone to a standard, hold them all to it. Rape is a hard subject to approach, granted. The least Ho can say is something went down with my best friend and I don't feel safe, please give me time. Instead he kisses him and in the same breath lumps him with the rest. It doesn't matter that Siran already knows. It means nothing if Ho won''t tell him. It conveys mistrust yet Ho turns to him for a place to crash. Jealousy, insecurity and frustration. Imagine finding out from a friend that your sister/brother is engaged. (Random I know) Why didn't you hear it from the source. It implies trust. Once again Siran isn't perfect but let's face it no one here in the story is, not even Ho.
...you know, this reminds of a tv series where there was a similar relationship dynamic. I hated that series a lot actually, as the relationship deteriorated and broke eventually. Does anyone remember Smallville? Lex Luthor and Clark Kent were just like that...but everyone was biased against Lex and the way Clark treated him was always justified by narrow-minded people who just thought, "Oh, but he's Superman, so he can do no wrong!" Actually, I really disliked Clark. He was such a brat, even if he had his own problems, how could you ask for favors and give nothing in return?
Fucking finally!! I’ve WAITED for this comment! My thoughts EXACTLY!!
Oh, btw I just realized that we “know” each other from your Fuck Buddy comment.. xD u a real G (*^ω^*)
Hiiiiii there! ヾ(❀╹◡╹)ﾉ~..."Opinionated but I'm always spitting straight facts"... ;)...Thank you very much! "A real G", I am D-E-A-D! xD You do ring a bell! Oh my are we fated?! ;) Lol...I think you and I sort of share a similar wavelength. (●'◡'●)ﾉ
I actually didn't see much of Superman. I didn't like Lana or Lois and wanted Clark with Chloe or Chloe and Lex. x) I gave up. ╮(￣▽￣)╭
Oops meant to say Smallville. Clark was a hottie but I don't really like Superman type characters. I like darker with blurry lines...
I'm at a loss here with the plot and how I feel about certain characters. Lol...I like Ellian, than again I like very bad boys that have deep rooted reasons for being heartless or jerks. Now Gunchan, is a type of character I cannot particularly like. He's aloof, out for himself and you never know what his true intentions are. Que sera sera. I'll stick around with a murky plot because I love sinful sexy delicious vampires with massive chips on their shoulder. ╮(￣▽￣)╭ (▰˘◡˘▰)
I agree x10
I am not satisfied. I really don't care for the uke, Ryo. I get the seme, Akanishi shouldn't have lied but that shouldn't lead to you screwing some strangers w/o protection. Realistically he should/could have some nasty disease. Neither is perfect but why does Akanishi have to be the only one to apologize and grow. Ryo remained the same and his past traumatic experience can only excuse you so much. Akanishi had to develop and grow despite his because of his reflect and love for Ryo. So Ryo just gets to act like a spoiled child/lover...
were always talking so much smack about Hanwool treating Yunho badly. Yunho is still pinning for his best friend and doesn't want for Naroo to be near him. I don't really like the change in Hanwool. He's lost what made him sexy and mysterious. He's bending over backwards for someone who doesn't see him if the other is around. I won't continue to follow this shit. The tiger deserves better than to chase after someone chasing someone else losing his personality while doing it. I am dropping this one.
What the?.. Just relax, this is really a beautiful story
LOL right. I was wondering the same thing like why put it on here that you don’t want to read it. It’s a pretty good story
Well Mr/Mrs know it all. I believe I did. Just came back to answer. Just like you enjoy said story, give your opinions like everybody else here, so did I. Not my cup of tea and it's alright for it to be yours or anyone else's reading. ╮(￣▽￣)╭
I figured she was introduced so that Hwa Gok could think twice about becoming a vampire. Personally, I would like to see him become one so that he could stay with Yibin forever. Yibin has suffered enough. Part of the reason Yibin didn't want to fall for him. I hope for once they actually go through with it. Story always ends with the vampire remaining alone for eternity.
Renjaku is my type of seme! His looks, style and demeanor turn me the fxxx on! ლ(´ڡ`ლ) (づ￣ ³￣)づ...He's the type you bow down to, get on your knees and worship... Yes, he's being an asshole but for a reason we don't know yet. The uke is adorkable, a tad creepy and lustful too! What a pair they make! (▰˘◡˘▰)...Yes Aoba is a hottie but he needs to get his own omega. (︶︿︶)＝凸 Lol
renjaku is a cruel prick I think