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honestly I wouldnt mind the effed plot in terms of it basically being porn with some "plot" sprinkled on top, but apart from the fact that the art's bad she basically has the mental age of a 12 year old, so it doesn't feel realistic that she'll mature one day or grow enough as a character, because her issue isn't just "being naive" but "purposefully kept mentally underdeveloped and uneducated" like bruh that's a whole nother level of yikes!
edit: also is it just me or did whoever draw the cover just fuck off afterwards thats some bait illustration work right there