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i like this as a story, but at the same time it feels like we're bombarded all the time with overexplanations of how they each feel instead of it being shown to us through their actions, as if the audience wont get it unless you spell everything out. It completely loses all the magic of storytelling. Genuinely think if the mangaka cut half the internal monologues this would already be better. Feels like it got way too dramatic for what it is also >__> maybe it's also cause of the internal monologues idk.