beta
honestly dont mind the braindead plot necessarily but it just has 0 appeal ~ it goes way too fast and smoothly and it doesn't feel like either of these people are interesting to follow or like there's much of a way for them to evolve. Smut's ok but the appeal for me is usually the framing around the smut.
Also this "straight" virgin sure accepted having to fuck a random twink for money quite easily it's just not even slightly believable, it makes you feel like everything is just a flimsy excuse for a plot. If I didn't care about a story I'd just watch porn man...