beta
The story from ch. 1-13 sucks so bad I wanna erase it from my memory. The plot drastically improves by ch. 14-16 and so forth.
I love and hate this story because of how it started but I'm gonna just forget the first 13 chapters and say that ch. 14 is ch. 1.
My only complaint was how come the rapist got upset that they got rejected by the person they raped. Plus how come the raped apologized to his rapist???
Make it make sense