Why can't we have more revenge stories where we just base everything on revenge. No actual plot but just plain revenge. Just torturing, and watching the people who hurt you crumble and beg. Crawling and gasping for forgiveness but will never get it. Cause that's not part of the story. It's all about REVENGE.
I tried. I really tried. I am seriously pushing myself now. This is not worth it.
I'm dropping this @Ch. 59
It's all gone!! (╯°Д °)╯╧╧
I only read this because of the REVENGE PLOT but it's all gone now.!
The problems are too much, and there's 10 things I can think of at the top of my head why this story sucks.
SPOILER ALERT!!
1. The FL was planning to poison the Aunt to prevent her from getting pregnant (got stopped)
2. The brother was forced to get married but his wife got hurt. The prescription was fake and could have been prevented but the "GUY" (whose into the FL, possibly the ML can't tell right now) stopped her from acting because of "not safe" and "she should think about herself" (I've read so much revenge plots and this problem is not even big) the wife died and blamed the younger brother. They could've prevented that!!
3. If they prevented that, the younger brother wouldn't have been poisoned by the Aunt. Which led to the Brother from getting blamed for his death!!
4. Although, they were able to get the Aunt to get put in prison, they don't know how to connect it to the cousin. Which clearly the cousin was helping the Aunt, how do you think she knew where the poison was placed!!
5. Because the cousin wasn't blamed, she was able to talk to her mother and got all of the GU family wanted for who knows what reason (they didn't explain!) So the FL ran with the mother to the GUY's hidden house. While the brother got taken and imprisoned.
6. The mother is weak af. FL was planning on ditching her cause she constantly taking the Aunt's side instead of hers, but GUY persuaded her to keep her mom. (If I was her, I would ditch her cause she's useless). While the GUY, from the beginning caused the FL from straying away from taking revenge telling her it's not safe, or he can handle it. The FL is not even trying to do anything, and keeps listening to the GUY. (She should know better since she went back in time. Why is she so useless, why are you listening to this guy!! Why is he manipulating you!! You should make your own choices woman!!)
7. Now around ch. 59 the FL (for some odd reason) is taking care of a restaurant run by GUY and everyone seem to forget her face. Except the cousin. But when she saw her, she just wondered why she was there. (I thought she was wanted?? Did "years later" happened?? How come noone cares that a wanted person is working in a restaurant, or walking around??)
8. If years later happened, then how come the aunt is still pregnant? They portray the Aunt and mom as Old right now, but she's still pregnant. So it couldn't have been that long ago since they all ran away. That doesn't make sense!!
9. I am so lost. I don't know what's happening anymore, and the FL hasn't done anything to make her life better!! She's still stuck with that GUY!! What is she doing?? I thought she wanted to take revenge??
10. The whole story suck shit!! I'm done. Writing this makes me want to drop it now. I'm frustrated and annoyed with everyone, noone is worth reading this story for ( I normally force myself for a certain character, but this is shit!).
(︶︿︶)=凸 goodbye!
If you want to complain complain about the actual wrongdoers and wrongdoings. Like the guy letting her brother die, her b**** mother (who is in the wrong simply because she believes her sister over her own daughter, not because she's a 'doormat' like others say. Doing that just emphasizes how one doesn't believe the culprit has any responsibility. In that case saying she's a 'doormat' is like you saying the FL is useless. It only shows admiration for the culprit and erases any wrongdoing they may have done giving one no reason to call the mother a 'doormat'), the father, the aunt and the cousin.
I didn't say that those people are good people. I only mentioned how frustrated I felt towards the FL since she hasn't done anything to make her situation better. It got worse then, later it became confusing. Yes she is a doormat. The plot had a lot of opportunity to save her and her family, her mom is a push over. Which seems to pass over to her cause she kept listening to the ML.
My memory of childhood has always been anime from TV, and when he got a computer I got to watch more anime there. Most of them are magical romance, etc. I remember I used to watch mermaid melody, Earl and fairy, Yamato Nadeshiko, Jewel pet, etc. (I was under 10)
When I turned 13(junior high), my shows grew to more non-child appropriate shows but still ok such as One piece, law of Ueki, Full metal Alchemist, etc.
Peak of junior high, my sister's friend recommended her a shounen-ai manga. (Shounen-ai is a light romance between guys) at this time, I was already reading manga since I found out that anime is so limited compared to manga. My sister made me read it instead of her since she's not into that, I wasn't complaining but I wasn't into that (at that time) either That's when I got introduced to YAOI. (It always starts light)
My life changed!!
My stories progressed to YAOI (Boys love, most of the time has sex scenes) and it didn't even lasted long when my sister found out about it since I stole her iPod to read them (I was so dumb).
[She got so mad that I was reading YAOI, when she was to blame for making me read them. So she never mentioned it again.]
But I never stopped, and continued reading them and watching them until high school. I strayed from hetero romance, to the point of hating it. I couldn't handle them.
During high school, I was only reading YAOI stories however I was obsessed with sports animes that has zero romance, and it's just a bunch of male characters. Such as, prince of tennis, kuroko no basket, eye shield 21, Free!, Hikaru no Go, etc.
At University, I still was into YAOI. But I encountered Harley Quinn mangas.
Purely coincidental!
But they never bothered me, since they were not dark, not too dramatic, and always a happy ending. That's #1 reason I couldn't go back to straight romance was the struggle the FL will go through to get the ML , and vise versa. Though I prefer to make the ML struggle.
After university, as a working adult. I slowly don't watch anime as much, to the point of never. I read manga more. I still don't read alot of straight romance... but they're more purposeful??
I read romance where the FL takes revenge, or has strong character to manipulate the guy/s. Such as, cheating men must die, (villainess plots), revenge plots, etc.
So I thank thee Harley Quinn for making me comfortable to read straight stories again.
Do you understand BLIND bitch?? Tell me I'm wrong?? Was I wrong to slap that side bitch's face when she almost caused a WAR??
I'm only doing my JOB! (╬ ̄皿 ̄)凸
I married you to take on the job of a QUEEN, and that is to take car of the kingdom. I accept that you don't love me, I accept your relationship (I don't need your love, I don't need a man).
Since that is not my job!! ヽ(`Д´)ノ
But don't blame me if I slap the hell out of this dumb side hoe , for being a dumb bitch.
Tell me am I wrong?? Tell me!! (╯°Д °)╯╧╧
I have no problem if their purpose in the story is to cause conflict to the main couple. However, I hate FA who already HAS someone but moves on to the ML. That "idea" of cheating or wanting to have all the guy's attention, sickens me. Especially, when they assume that the guy likes them back.
[Like... what makes you think ALL guys like you just because you have a Vag*Ina!!] (╯°Д °)╯╧╧
(I confess...I read YAOI)
So it really frustrates me to see women who assume men like them, without batting an eye. Worst of all, I especially HATE when women gets upset when they find out they're wrong in their assumption and BLAMES the other party (FL).
For this instance, if this blue haired side bitch blames the FL for taking the ML thinking he's hers. Then, there's a high chance that I might drop this. (Unless, the ML notices her actions and reassures the FL by rejecting her outright).
Otherwise, Good bye! (●'◡'●)ノ
What made the story change?
I expect more from the Emperor, and hopefully the blonde side hoe won't be a problem. Especially, the black haired woman. (Can't call her a side bitch/hoe yet) I just want pure romance for the main couple, the Emperor is just plain ADORABLE!!
He’s baby