I just reread it and these are my thoughts.
I’m assuming most people disagree but please keep your mind open
I feel like they need to make Maythan a bit more likable. HEAR ME OUT ಠ_ಠ He always acts a lil irritable and selfish. I like him, I’m rooting for him, but sometimes I’m just thinking “pls get serious rn maythanstop acting like a child” He has his sweet moments, like we just saw, but it doesn’t feel like he actually cares. Sometimes the people around him are being serious and he’s acting goofy “oh god why is he confessing to me now??! I have a pizza in the oven!” Type of scenarios. While to other characters this is an incredibly important thing. Also, a lot of the characters are incredibly devoted to him when he’s barely done anything. Or rather how he’s acted/his actions aren’t the type of thing to warrant this kind of love and devotion.(in my opinion)It’s stretching the believability for the drama a little bit for me. Comedy is put right into the dramatic moments so it’s kind of hard to really feel the emotions of it. :/ He treats the people around him in a weird way. Idk I’m just kind of getting whiplash from the amount of times they cut to him being serious to “quirky” in the middle of a serious moment
We have our lesbian couple now we need to make the gay one cannon LETS MAKE IT HAPPEN !!!!
“Why didn’t the old me get one-“ you are one and the same stfu I don’t like this. It just feels like a way to get the newly together relationship/sex thing again. Bro you have to be able to write a happy in love couples. I already skip over most of the smut because it happens so often. We’ve done this before.. It feels weird that they’re having a sexual relationship when one has no memories. (Even though it’s still annoying in other stories)Other stories explore the lost memories trope in a way that creates conflict. Like “I feel like I’d be cheating on you because you don’t have your memories” or “you aren’t who I fell in love with” orrr “I don’t know you please get away.” Orrrrrrrr “I’ll try my best to love you again” IDK THERE ARE WAYS TO DO IT
Am I crazy or has nothing of consequence been happening? It feels like filler. It’s not bad, but I just don’t think the main plot is progressing, it hasn’t for a while. Maybe speed up the romance or the idol stuff idk this kind of lost me
Where can I find “A Lover's Contract” on here?T_T
If that annoying bitch that was crying becomes a love interest I’m gonna be so pissed off.
Something about him really has me intrigued and excited. I kept cheering him on out loud while reading I love him sm I can’t wait for more
Minhee is pissing me off she’s so fucking annoyingwhy can’t they write good female characters. They all have to be otherworldly beautiful and eventually gain some sort of skill that the mc needs them for. I’m on chapter 10 so I’ll read and see
Couldn’t we just get a short info dump or something? Not every character needs their extremely detailed backstory shown to us I miss our main characters being the focus, why do we barely see Xin. I thought we would be getting a story about our Xin and his guardian but it’s mostly guardian guy walking around listening to everyone’s backstories. I hope we get back to progressing the main plot soon
She’s letting the mask slip way too much + I don’t even know where this is going. Have we even made much progress?