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I just reread it and these are my thoughts.
I’m assuming most people disagree but please keep your mind open
I feel like they need to make Maythan a bit more likable. HEAR ME OUT ಠ_ಠ He always acts a lil irritable and selfish. I like him, I’m rooting for him, but sometimes I’m just thinking “pls get serious rn maythanstop acting like a child” He has his sweet moments, like we just saw, but it doesn’t feel like he actually cares. Sometimes the people around him are being serious and he’s acting goofy “oh god why is he confessing to me now??! I have a pizza in the oven!” Type of scenarios. While to other characters this is an incredibly important thing. Also, a lot of the characters are incredibly devoted to him when he’s barely done anything. Or rather how he’s acted/his actions aren’t the type of thing to warrant this kind of love and devotion.(in my opinion)It’s stretching the believability for the drama a little bit for me. Comedy is put right into the dramatic moments so it’s kind of hard to really feel the emotions of it. :/ He treats the people around him in a weird way. Idk I’m just kind of getting whiplash from the amount of times they cut to him being serious to “quirky” in the middle of a serious moment