sammy's Manga

Ch.27
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Idk so far I love the art but something isn’t clicking
-it’s missing something
-the twins feel like the most likeable people, maybe because they actually have a personality even if it is mischievous
-also please don’t tell me he’ll marry that other lady and ml will be her son because I can’t think of another reason why he was drawn so many times

ch.29
idk y something is not clicking
maybe it's the insalove that is happening with the family memebers
- Or maybe that everything is falling into place and everything is just so conveniant

Ch.12

Ch.6
Ok so far it’s ok although I don’t get why she’s so young up on him
- he really doesn’t seem worth it
-also that scene where he was on the couch just laying. I know it was supposed to be sexy but it just looked awkward because that pose doesn’t look comfortable at all

It’s good but there isn’t any proper development to anything
-wveeytging seems unrealistic so take it with a grain of salt