beta
i hate when a fl is supposed to be super intelligent but doesn’t do anything to show for it. it’s like when an writer describes a characters looks in detail but it comes off cringe and unnatural. rather than saying she’s a master of memorization or extremely talented in research, id rather have us find out than be blatantly told she has these traits
also the lack of build up is concerning, she just doesn’t feel like a real person. but rather a caricature of what an interesting fl is supposed to be like