beta
i tried to get into this story four times because the art was pretty, but my god the dialogue and character relationship development was awful. i thought i was being odd, but no it’s just the story… the main couple have no meaningful interactions so i felt barely any romance build up between them. i didn’t like how his trauma was portrayed and that somehow this alpha is given special treatment after giving us literally nothing??
their relationship felt really forced to me because they were special to each other based on the most insignificant past meeting they had!! and then there was barely any bonding, so the half-assed blushing or them getting flustered after the badly timed physical touch was a letdown