Is it just me or is the dialogue really good? The interaction between uke and seme is fluid and funny. Usually I find yaoi dialogue bland unless it's moved along by the plot but this shit is preeetty sweet ლ(´ڡ`ლ)
It is similar in the raws. And I prefer the raws. Maybe when the fan translation group uploads theirs. You guys can give it a read. There are parts the same and others completely different. The version in the main section is from Tapas and their verison is localization and westernized Of the real story: which is not a good or bad thing. It is just different.
I feel like a sympathise more with section chief here. Yes, he was definitely harsh on Seunghyun, but despite the fact that he states he dislikes emotional confrontations, in this situation he was clearly emotionally affected by Seunghyun avoidence of him as section chief was already beginning to be invested in their relationship