This turned out much better than expected. Pacing is so good. The plot is pretty interesting. I should have left it marinate a bit longer.
Why is it so rushed!? I had a feeling this would be the route the author go with but it's so rushed. this story had so much potential....
This turned out much better than expected. Pacing is so good. The plot is pretty interesting. I should have left it marinate a bit longer.