ThotChocolate

I honestly really love this, I feel bad for the MC. Everyone always makes their own assumptions about him to the point he just gave up trying to explain himself. Both the MC and the ML have led tough life's, I hope they can heal one another and both become happy.

I can't believe I pushed through and read all the current 24 chapters in one sitting. I was hoping the writing got better, especially since it is a cool concept... But the execution is lackluster.
You're supposed to feel bad for the MC who has had a rough life, but a lot of what they say the mc's supposed to be like doesn't add up to how they portray him. He's supposed to be cute, sexy, pitiful, smart, the most impressive superhuman, would do anything for some money, witty, a dumb ass who can't tell what's going on in front of him etc etc...... He's a mary-sue of a character at this point. No character has so many positive and """pitiful""" traits without being one.
Don't even get me started on the ML. He doesn't even have a personality besides aggressive horn dog. That's all he is, angry that the MC who doesn't even know him won't "come to his side" and "let him have his way" like be for real. At this point the author should've just made this a porn plot comic since it is already almost one.
Cheesy plotlines aren't the worst, if anything I enjoy them if the writing is fun.... But this is so disappointing. I should've read the comments instead of diving right in, I learnt my lesson. I hate writing such intensely negative comments, but I hope that when I do it deters people from wasting their time if these are also things that they dislike in comics.