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This could have been a great story, but it has so many holes. I mean right in the beginning she says she will call the police, but she doesn't... The hospital would have done tests ti her blood as she was out of it, but they never mention that and she could have used that to report to the police.... And in the rest of the story there so many other holes... Like she fought with her fiance, and he found out it was her that saved him, but his feelings and way of treating her still didn't change, also why would he never tell her he thought she was cheating? They fought a lot, so how did that never come up? If it did, then she probably would have been hurt and left him earlier... It would have made much more sense that she wanted a divorce because he didn't trust her... Their fights never made any sense, I mean that's not how people fight... When people fight, they yell about what they're upset, but they didn't do that... Also how come her family never thought he was abusive with the way he treated her when they fought? And they fought in front of them sometimes... And also that adopted sister made no sense... She didn't look at all upset at the guys that raped her, the police didn't show up or did she run before they did on the day she was raped? How come that never gets mentioned? Also how come she didn't have a heart attack when she got raped? Also if she really did have a heart attack, I think it was because of the medicine she took all the time, because any time it swited her she was "sick" so she probably took way more medicine then she should?