beta
yo cmon what the hell? The chemistry really is not chemistrying. The confession scene after literal YEARS of angst and pining they've done is just her walking into the room and saying it casually? Like, even if that's the lowkey kind of vibe they want to go for, there's a way to make it look interesting. But here, it felt like it happened so monotonically, there's no highs and lows, no anticipation, so bland. This is supposed to be the grand payoff, why is it so lame??
The author is NOT cooking with this one ooof.