Flare want to read (All 4584)
beta
Great premise,terrible execution.
1st; bottom's personality and actions didn't match at all. Also,how come a fucking gangster was defeated so easily? The faces and the bodies didn't match,it was rushed and top was a jerk who made no sense at all. Also,was looking up to some old men yaoi but it looked like the age thing was added just as some kind of fetish cause what the Hell. Even the smut sucked ╥﹏╥
I thought he will take out a knife dagger and ther will be a fight but turns out he's a pu**y
Fr I was so upset
Wut kinda gangsta is this. I got 2nd hand embarrassment
Fuck,I so needed the MC and the cop to actually end together (〜￣△￣)〜
Anyone has some similar recommendation (childhood friends to lovers,mutual unrequited and both though mc)??? Ofc with an happy ending cause I'm literally sobbing please :,0