
I agree with this comment:
"Wouldve been a good read if it wasnt for the unnecessary bitches.. Plot wouldve been good if there werent those girls popping here nd there.. Shouldve jst made this purely about the mc gainong exps.."
The whole story was great but the harem ruins it for me. Why are authors so into making girls into bitches with big boobs and butts that don't even know how to stand straight? These women always lean forward to "accentuate" the gravity-defying racks while they push their butts out that don't match their statures. These kinds of authors just depict girls being too easy. I have nothing against polyamorous relationships, really. But the way these authors depict this kind of relationship isn't healthy or anything. It was the first time you see a man and because of one tiny thing that doesn't normally make someone's heart flutter, the girl blushes and pushes herself to that man?! Dude, you're putting the girls too low!! If the author of this work is a girl, shame on you. Seriously. There are many ways to create a polyamorous relationship but you choose to do it like this? Girls being easy and guys being a non-loyal cheater who pounces on any "hot girl"?! Even if the author is not a woman and is a man, is that really how you want to depict men? I'm sick of this kind of stories. I know that some people would say that I should not read the story and just "move on"/read another one with no harem tag or that I knew what I was getting into because the harem is tagged on this work but honestly speaking, IMO, this is making the story awful. The was really good but the women popping here and there and the MC blushing here and there, thinking of things and such make him such an asshole and less likable.
Does anyone here know someone or is an artist who is willing to draw and turn my work into a long strip either by hand or digitally? I would like someone to turn my work into webtoon-ish style but I don't know anyone who knows how to. I plan to do a promotion using the long strip so it's technically not the whole work, just snippets from it
Thanks in advance.
I would seriously stop reading this and be mad at the MC all my life! Dude, that's the "love of YOUR friend's life"! [This phrase is gonna be rude to the girl but] "bros before h o e s" right? That's the BROCODE! He's you best friend, he's your bro! I know the friend doesn't own the girl or anything but there's a nonverbal rule/understanding that a person cannot and MUST NOT go out with their friends exes or crushes or whatever label there is.
Please tell me if this is the case. This'll be my last straw. I can't tolerate this together with the awful writing of romance + harem
hes not interested in her tho...
he's also not interested/oblivious to other girls but...
i think he's just being friendly tho and not tryna be awkward