I understand that it is kind of messy, but the whole plot literally revolves around the world ending because of Peste, so what would you expect? I think the story flows the way it should be, I like how they made MC powerful but he was being hold back by his edeya/ediya? and definitely his past.
About the romance, i think this is the only manhwa that i love the romance part, just because it was introduced at the first part of the story, and gradually bloomed
Read this in one sitting (or laying down). The one I pity the most would be the ex-bf. At first, I hated him so much and wanted for him to feel that he lost the love of his life, which i guess later on, he really felt that way. I love the way he grieved not just once (the supposed death of Yoon) but also at the end of their relationship. He really didn't expect that Yoon will be able to move on after their so-called break up but what do u kno, Kwon is a really good kisser HAHXHA
What i also love is that they gave themselves (all of them) time to heal. They all rushed themselves to a relationship that was not built by anything other than lies and guilt (Taejoo and his new bf), and the pretense of using one another for fun??? (Yoon and kwon). Really they did everything so fast, that Yoon didn't even healed from Taejoo, now he has to heal from Kwon too.
But anyways, love love this story. It was painful and the comfort later on was worth it.
5/5 for me
MY BABY WHY ARE YOU GROWING SO FAST