Just binged it and here are my thoughts:
1. I’m just as lost on Yurien as FL is. He clearly remembers, so why is he in love with her all of a sudden? If it was just some kind of love at first sight crap, then imma be very disappointed. His feelings seem to run deep, so there must be some genuine reason for them. Just what happened that he overlooks his own death and death of pretty much everyone around him?
2. I have a major 2nd ML syndrome. They had way more proper moments together and he’s not only hot, but also such a gentleman. I really like him.
3. This is such a unique story, I love it
Isn’t this developing way too quickly? First the mercenary being obsessed with her from the get-go. Now that kid trusting her instantly after going through incredibly traumatic event. It’s like they try to rush everything. I don’t believe that anyone with this kind of trauma, who was lied to the first time as well, would be just so happy and fast to trust again. Sure, he could agree to sponsoring, but loyalty? Shouldn’t their relationship slowly build up? It’s not like she would admit „I will abuse you” straight to his face, and with her reputation she shouldn’t be that easy to trust even more. Idk, the artstyle is so pretty, but the plot is so rushed and already has some dumb points.
Imma check on this from time to time, so I wanna know. Did the knight (that guarded FL) get married to that kid? Was that resolved in the end or not? Cause if he married the kid then I just wanna drop it. I don’t want to risk wasting hours reading just to see child marriage
Bro wants her to be full of love, kind, make friends and help others, but he’s salty when she does that Also, I wonder when will they discover each others true nature? I get he only hides it, cause he probably doesn’t want to scare her and make her hate him, only see good in the world, but the extreme to which he went really backfired. He wants her to just be a carefree kid, but the opposite happened because he’s not a reliable adult to her, so she has to take care of him instead. He really should’ve held back with that „naive and innocent” act Just act as decent person, not a fool
Is it another one of those stories where father is neglectful and cold and FL gotta be a genius to win his affection and just acts like him being a terrible father never happened and it’s just all good and never actually acknowledged? Cause I really can’t stand those kind of stories. Why can’t fathers be good fathers from the start?
The grand duke saying they grew closer to each other when all he’s done was third-wheeling
I know it’s also because of trauma and all, but it is getting really tiring how she still can’t bring herself to be with the ML and take her rightful place. “Mortal danger”? She constantly risked her life without a thought during war, she’s been in mortal danger this entire story. Like PLEASE, let her finally have full confidence, it’s been 130 chapters already.
This is such stupid writing. You would think that if you saw a guy win over and over again, including multiple apostles, one would gain trust in his abilities and knowledge. This is kinda like having a Karen in a fight. Yuna had potential, why are they going with the typical “damsel in distress” trope? They have well-written female characters here, I thought we were past that
Why does a psycho gotta be the best looking character here? Also, sorry, but so far he’s a lot smarter than her. I just can’t understand how did she expect to inherit the crown while making 0 connections, enemies actually even, not following any of her duties or responsibilities and actually openly acting like an immature villainess? Like this isn’t a transmigration story, she actually did all that. Not to mention she knew he was a complete psycho and still didn’t try to take any measures against it. What did she expect would happen? He didn’t even steal the crown from her, even without faul play he probably would’ve gotten it. I just don’t get it, was she that stupid or is it just bad writing? I can’t really get past that part. He’s awful and dangerous, but she basically handed him that win.
I know it doesnt matter but shoes on the bed always irk me
Also, they are the best :( <3
Honestly, the only Yaoi I can read is either extremely healthy and consensual one or both being living human trash. I hate when there’s just one victim and abuser, here though both are equally horrible people. The girl is the only one catching strays, but good for her not to get involved with the guy who clearly just wanted to use her. One is a stalking sex abuser (SA is 95% of Yaoi genre though, so what’s new?) and another commits a DUI, blames his „best friend” and very clearly just seduces women into sleeping with him seeing how he judged this girl based on how „easy” she is. They deserve each other. If art-style was better people would be eating this up
