i liked most of it. when the seme is the younger one it makes it feel less taboo. the one part that really weirded me out though was where he says that they're fully-fledged lovers or something. saying that kind of implies things. you know, that lines have been crossed or that someone's hit home base.
is it just me or did sugisaki? did his personality change a lot. same with ryuuji. they had their story but they barely seem the same at all.