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The plot was confusing and the layout of the panels wasn’t helping.
All the characters looked the same like there wasn’t a singe distinct thing about the 2 couples .
The whole thing felt rushed and unrealistic.
So did the 2 blondes know each other? Did they stalk people together??
There wasn’t enough urgency like I get it the drained character who hates their life but omg if I were in the situation I’d be genuinely freaked out sleeping in a hotel every night.
And Omg if you’re going to do a yandre do it right . The blonde was too practical just sitting on his couch solving a rubix cube?
Speaking of the blonde what even was his name? Like I feel like we never got to that.
And the stalker was just too smart to be that stupid. Like do you know what I mean?