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I love this manga , great story great art , but really this could have been better , edith was defeated way too easy for me , atropos could have been a full character with a past similar to ray , and have her timeline and maybe revenge too , I WOULD HAVE LOVED to see ray take his esp back and have his revenge from edith after a defeat , I dont know so much more exiting potential could have come out of this , also we definetly needed some sides of ray life after giving up his esp and honesty lucy&kile sides were too boring even with the sex .