The story suffers from either:
1) because of the manhwa format
2) the author / illustrator doesn’t know what they are doing
We can see this happening from calliope and brunette convo, it spans for 3 chapters. Its fine IF this 3 chapter conversation are important to understand the standpoint between 2 characters that are important to the stories. Unless this author is onto something of foreshadowing like what togashi did in hunter x hunter, these kind of scenes are pointless and it begs you to question, whether the author knows what they are doing, or really just clueless and abruptly change the scenery altogether just because they want a new start to keep the plot going (but still clueless eitherway). This is also why Manga format are for me better, compare to korean manhwa, this type of problem (conversation/conflict, unless its about shounen fighting) usually progress forward within 1 chapter or 1/2 chapter. I don’t know if this is true within the novel, did they also have filler episodes like this?
I had an inkling that the fl would go super saiyan down the line, but didn’t think it would be through not taking meds (⌒▽⌒)
*because every fantasy korean shoujo reincarnation always follow this super saiyan power