this chapter was absolute chaos and i loved every second of it
i burst out laughing when dorothy showed up in that hat, i’m sorry
the emotional roller coaster this chapter took me on should be illegal
see now.......helena makes it so hard to feel bad for her /:
I just wanna ask smtng. Does Helena like the crown prince too? Or nah??.
since it’s the epilogue i'm gonna share my unpopular opinion: i think this story relied too heavily on sex as a way to develop their relationship, so to me, their relationship kinda has.....no emotional substance
the art and the overall plot are still really nice though
low key agree…like there was a point where i was like ‘huh when did the seme start liking the uke’ lool
Omg:; thank god I'm not the only one. I feel like the plot is 1% and the rest is sex. Like<3 i love sex scenes but it doesn't feel connective? Yknow
honestly I don't agree, if u look back on how many sex scenes there were there rlly wasn't that many compared to other ones. their emotional bond was kinda built outta nowhere, but isn't that the same for like for most smut manwhas?
same lmaoooo, i even went back and reread some chapters because i felt like i missed something
100% agree!! like i know what i signed up when i picked a smut manhwa and i’m here for it, but can i please get some relationship development too.....like pretty please
i meaaaaan, i think the sex kinda took up like 70-80% of the story and that’s pretty much what developed their relationship. but big agree on the bond being built out of nowhere, which is why i think it lacks substance
i feel like suddenly it was like “look they like each other” but there wasn’t much development to that point or an explanation there was just sex lol
Mann <3 the scenes aren't enjoyable if they love just doesn't feel there.
When it sent when I wasnt done <3
I was thinking of alien in my closet how every scene made me feel so blushy inside because you watched their relationship grow during the scenes +outside. Like it was so sweet. Not to hate on these scenes but, it was just hi heres 2 chapters of them smashing not to complain but to complain, give us romance plot and connection!! >:(
i love the pacing of this. i really like how it’s getting right to the point
Fr, but it's also not so fast your getting whiplash
that princess (Larissa or whatever her name is) has a level of delusion i hope to achieve one day
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Y'ALL SHOULVE STOP MAKING THOSE HATE COMMENT WITH THAT GIRL, IM GETTING TIRED LIKING IT ALL WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW