i like this but i’m getting too much backstory and not enough present day. the back stories and sex scenes could’ve easily been condensed into a couple chapters not the 20+ that they are. this may sound rude but i wanna see the baby. i like the backstory but we’re getting too much of it at one it feels like it’s overtaken the main plot line also the dude with the class prez is an asshole
i read spoilers and i will be dropping this
okay so basically arjen becomes irrelevant to the story and arien becomes the mc and it focuses solely on her. arjen will basically give all of his power to arien to protect her and because of that he loses his connection with jason which is infuriating because he really loved his powers and was so connected with jason. but because of this arien will grow up to be like super op and arjen will become a knight but we rarely see arjen he’s been forced out of the spotlight. he takes a backseat to a character that isn’t even that likeable in the first place like arien’s character is so flat and boring it’s ridiculous. like there’s nothing about her character that makes me go “she’s a great character”
first that’s sexual assault and there is absolutely no reason why there is romance in this
i’ve read the novel so i know that there was going to be romance but there is no reason for it. it doesn’t need to have romance in it to be good. this is going to lead to a whole lotta bs in the future imma just warn y’all now, i’m not mad that there is romance i just see it as unnecessary. and honestly why are you mad that i don’t want romance in it like there’s nothing wrong with you liking the romance it’s just not for me personally. and i also don’t see why you specifically commented on my post when a lot of people commented about how they didn’t like nor want the romance. so please kindly take your bs somewhere else
nobody is bitching you would know if i was mad i’m just saying i don’t see why the romance is necessary why are you trying to make a problem where there isn’t one. like why are YOU mad that I don’t like romance you could’ve just kept scrolling get the fuck out my face fr though because i don’t understand why you’re so upset.
i just wanna say if and when jiwon is fully cured he would fold bryan, in a heart beat