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This is the kind of story that makes you want more but in a good way.

that's it? well that felt incomplete.

well this is the kind of story that deserves more. What I mean is that is worthy of being longer. its good.

I find this story cute and I find that messed up to call something so vividly drawn cute but regardless the story line is really cute. My only complaint is I find it messed up that the guy got him drunk and then took advantage of him but my dislike of that cooled down a bit after the last 2 pages. I still think its messed up but again I was left with....dang that's so cute....

Also its rare to see a yaoi dealing with an older man. That alone caught my interest. The story in itself is complete enough but of course it wouldn't hurt to add more of this cuteness.

its actually a really sweet story and has my vote that you will like it even if you don't like one shots.

At first I thought I was going to stop reading after they go straight into sex to start with but I kept reading anyways and they caught my attention when they mentioned they're toy makers. You don't see that often so I kept reading. I'm satisfied with the ending and liked it but It does give off the vibe of being able to pull off more story.

well its interesting. Short but interesting. Would be better if they continued and showed what happens after they get together.

....really that's the end? and to think I was hoping to see him as an incubus. I wanted to see him not be able to control his lust or something. You know this story would have been even better if it showed the long term or at least showed them after they end up together. they stopped even before the relationship even began and we never got to hear about that brother he mentioned in the beginning.

Its a great story and very interesting. I am actually really curious as to who rain really has feelings for though.

This was super heart warming and really worth the read and that's coming from some one who usually doesn't like one shots.

I thought it was a super sweet manga. I enjoyed reading but for some reason I kept feeling it went a little long like some of the scenarios were just similar situations repeated. But I still really enjoyed the story and thought it was super sweet. My favorite line was when he thanked the heavens for jun. so so sweeeeet.