I actually enjoyed the story I admittedly liked the story 10 times more when the translater stopped commenting on every comment it was distracting and broke immersion. My favorite part was the ending moral I think they were trying to get across and I thought the ending was sweet.
Now I do remember needing to read one of the chapters elsewhere because it was missing part of it. I think it 58 or something.
I really like the story I didn't find it confusing at all. It was about a guy trying to save his mafia brother not finding him but realizing they were after info he had which he finds on the girl then goes after said girl and falls in love in the process. For me it was really easy to follow. I didn't find anything wrong with the plot personally and found it enjoyable from beginning to ending well to point i just left off at. Can't wait to find out the main girls background story.
For me I think this had a lot of potential to be a great story but it became more about sex than anything else I also wasn't a fan of the original hunters being the bad guys plot line it was like an attack on soldiers well it felt like it to me based on how they showcased it.
But my biggest pet peeve is that they made that manly goodlooking uke morph when they had sex again later and any time they were in the same scenes his art work dimished. He just stopped looking the same. When he first slept with him his penis was as huge as the semes and the seme had a big one even at that age but later they make it normal size and his body becomes childish. I don't know I thought he looked fine before and I admire mangas that don't feel the need to make a strong uke look weaker when the seme grows up.
But even though I was irritated they did that I still actually liked the story I just think it could have been better.
Its hard to keep up with what's going on with how it's currently being scanned. I wonder if someone will upload different ones that are the full chapters and fix the past ones including the ones with the wrong manga though those ones did make me curious about that manga (something about my daughters the final boss).
But other than that this is a really good story.
That's odd what's with all the chapters after 91 they all seem to be repeats. The actual ending is chapter 91 and it's very obvious it's the ending. I kept Reading hoping for side chapters or extras but it seems to all be repeated chapters. Sad.
But it was a great story but I was curious what happened to the two rival characters in the end. And the ending was a tad rushed but honestly I figured he would do that after he knew for sure she was the one and he didn't want to let her get away. It was sweet and cute.
Ok this leaves me with 2 questions
1 what happened to the bad girls soul they said it was weird she disappeared like that?
2 does the son end up with Fatima? It'd be nice if she got to have someone and I can just imagine how that'd go.
Maybe he'd run all over chasing her and she'd keep rejecting him and then maybe when he's 100 since magicians have longer life spans maybe he'd earn her love though maybe he lives longer than 150 because I imagine his combo would be stronger than his dad. Though less than a dragon sadly but I still want her happy....wonder if another dragon exists?
I can't believe she asked that to funny. (Her comment on dragons taste).
I enjoyed the story but the end seems a bit sped up and for some reason I can't help but feel the author intended her male friend to have a larger part but changed their mind half way through. He suddenly disappeared we saw him occasionally but I was surprised he was so gung ho to pursue her when he found out but didn't try very hard then he says he'll show her his new and improved self at the wedding but then the author skips it and goes straight to the end. But if I ignore his part that seemed over looked well the authors new manger also seems like she should have had a larger part something seems lacking there and the follow up with the ex seemed fast and not much to it. It's extremely weird I'm actually wanting drama but for some reason I feel like another story was intended but the author changed their mind. Does anyone one else feel like that?
Well regardless I liked the story I'd rate it really high though if I could shake that feeling. Thing is this is my second time reading and I still feel that way. It just feels sped up shame.
Is it just me or does the story recently feel fast paced and hard to keep track of what's going on because it's like there giving a lot of fast paced content with very little detail. Maybe it's for mystery but I don't feel like it's helping the story any.