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Hmm to me this feels somewhat finished. The chapter where he decides to tie his hair feels like an end and the next when you read his dad's story feels like a side story but it only leaves the question of whether she chose to go back or not. If you went on what she said to him at the end she made it seem like she would go back when he was better but that's counter to what she decided when that all went down she sacrificed that result for him so I really feel like she already decided and then when he ties his hair it really has a feel of an ending though it makes me wonder what truly happened to his mother?.
Also 156 to 160 are repeats.
The ending was shocking I suddenly felt like I was reading a different manga all together. It was all laughter and then Bang. But it did get funny and happier again thank God. The rest of the ending made me smile but that shocking part made me cry. Great story love them as a couple.
Its messed up they changed the cover to something entirely unrelated. It makes things confusing when trying to remember what this is about.
I like it so far I'm curious how it'll end. Hate his CEO and I believe the bad guys are darn good actors I would have never guessed their identity. ( The girl and the one related to the police that last one in particular).
Is it just me or does the story recently feel fast paced and hard to keep track of what's going on because it's like there giving a lot of fast paced content with very little detail. Maybe it's for mystery but I don't feel like it's helping the story any.
I actually enjoyed the story I admittedly liked the story 10 times more when the translater stopped commenting on every comment it was distracting and broke immersion. My favorite part was the ending moral I think they were trying to get across and I thought the ending was sweet.
Now I do remember needing to read one of the chapters elsewhere because it was missing part of it. I think it 58 or something.
I really like the story I didn't find it confusing at all. It was about a guy trying to save his mafia brother not finding him but realizing they were after info he had which he finds on the girl then goes after said girl and falls in love in the process. For me it was really easy to follow. I didn't find anything wrong with the plot personally and found it enjoyable from beginning to ending well to point i just left off at. Can't wait to find out the main girls background story.
For me I think this had a lot of potential to be a great story but it became more about sex than anything else I also wasn't a fan of the original hunters being the bad guys plot line it was like an attack on soldiers well it felt like it to me based on how they showcased it.
But my biggest pet peeve is that they made that manly goodlooking uke morph when they had sex again later and any time they were in the same scenes his art work dimished. He just stopped looking the same. When he first slept with him his penis was as huge as the semes and the seme had a big one even at that age but later they make it normal size and his body becomes childish. I don't know I thought he looked fine before and I admire mangas that don't feel the need to make a strong uke look weaker when the seme grows up.
But even though I was irritated they did that I still actually liked the story I just think it could have been better.
Really liked the story A+