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I feel that the chapters are too small and too few in between. Marinating something is good, but it's better if it's not overdone because we forget plot, relationships, harships, etc.
I think that I like Daejun as the ML he (probably) loved him in his last life, he didn't leave him in the middle if trouble (like the actor did to Original ML) and he didn't ignore his troubles (now his cast member is a good candidate but it would have been better if the author showed his concern for Original ML)...but the romantic plot has taken such a big, background and spaced plot that you don't really cheer for him.