Can we just talk about how poorly written was the other character written? especially Tess? It is really sad, that the plot was focus too much to the MC (Arthur), that the author forgot to establish a good FL, since the author put a romance, I was expecting for a good build of FL, but it is not.
Im not bashing the author, but rather putting a constructive criticism about the author's work. Im hoping that the development in the novel will be great.
2021-05-17 21:11 marked
Can we just talk about how poorly written was the other character written? ...