wawwwww soo SWEEETT <3 goshh I am blushing after long time >< 1st story definitely WIN for me! :3 it was so damn FUNNY how seme got into that mess loving for the first time a man XD lolol it was sooo cute dorky sweet lovely funny awww I have fetish on sport's yaoi so uke being in track field team uhuh ~~~ I like other couples also but I would like more of the 1st one *Q*
ow nice one shot collection! :3 I liked all stories and that ould be nice material for longer sequels *Q* ww I like story with prince and kingdoms the most XD maybe cause I am in that mode also.. but www passionate romantic and sweet :3
Passionate and sweet? More like rapey and victim blamey. But each to their own, I guess...? KTBN.
gosh... all characters here are messed up!!! only I am for his wife! Ha Jin is hot but an ASSHOLE for doing such job and for neglecting and looking don his wife I would chop of his jewels for this T_T I hate when men are high and mighty just because they're hot and are practically coldhearted bastards ho like to have everything under their control. a for CHicken boy gosh guys he's just an horny boy. *o* I don't blame him and wife just gives him a chance to be horny like that. if she was decideful he wouldn;t be that persistant.
oh gosh and she told husband >< now what?>!>!>
you're an stupid and impolite kid. you brat need to go to chool and learn how to behave. 2nd you don't have any right to wish death to anyone especially to some stranger like me and bashing with primitive idiotic comment which offends me on many ways, on this manga. I really pitty humanity for such brats from USA mainly occuping this world of manga and manhwa which before had deeper meaning.
I really won't bother reading your comment since from first few words you already contradict yourself :) gosh such kids like you need to be PUNISHED. I really wonder what's your parents for rising such shit of human. *O* better learn something in life and how to talk with unknown person. I really feel sorry for just this world of manga which was really great place and nowdays filled with unpolite stupid ignorant and egocentric brats and their stupid pointless comments. eh humanity..
gosh..again tons of STUPID comments from BRATS who DIDN'T UNDERSTAND this story nor sensei's style. T_T
what's going with today's age when I come across good psuhological yaoi manga and see pointless stupid comments from kids who don't need to be here at all reading this. T_T I think mangago needs really to censure for younger than 18 years yaoi manga.
as for manga~ uhh good goshh MY FEELS!! that was sooo teasing so heartwrteching sad painful but romantic and sweet at the end. >_<
as always sensei's work always impress me with its deepness and brutality when it comes to psyhology of characters and their personalities and main emotion 'love' in stories like this. it was so twisted and confusing in terms how we should feel Shuuji and Kazuomi and their encounter.. acctually I so much liked the ending! thats the attitude I felt from uke he's acctually maso x3 Kazuomi was really complex he did had hate but he didn't see that he acctually wanted to like his brother later on after their coming together closer and breaking proudful wall around Shuuji he realised liking him.. but was stubborn and driven with still a bit of hate towards such people looking down on him and his mother.. he was acctually waiting for Shuuji to acknowledge himand to appologize for all that happened at the past.. alo we need to see the point of SHuuji he had familly but as little one he came to know his father cheated on mother and this is really painful especially for kids who enjoy warmth of familly this was dirty to Shuuji he wanted to tell that to women who out of pleasure' stole his father as he thought. adults always make stupid mistakes and kids fall to their trap and are being unhappy that's because in most cases adults don't release that they are selfish and they should pay attention to those who couldn't chose how to be born or from ho or when or where.. and so on Shuuji after that accident as kid always had a feeling of guilt but wasn't free enough to confess and appologize for that.. he deired at one point to be punished by Kazuomi unconsciouslly. later on we can see that he acctually wanted to be pushed to the corners by him and just wasn't honet ith himself enough. sister plays small role here as only 'fired up obstacle' to Kazuomi to obtain goal of finansing his studies with money of Shuuji's father.. acctually I really hate when people pay too much attention to blood relations. so what if he's not their child I would gladly help talented and motivated kid to go study if he wants it o.o people sometimes can look really stupid and be really harsh. I am glad Shuuji broke his wall of proudful self and confessed to Kazuomi honestly giving him support. also Kazuomi needed something like that to lift his pain and anger and replace it with new future goals and love. wwww I really liked it. thanks sensei :)
I liked also that no much info we got just scatters and blurry 'picture' on the story and behind it gives us place to create more detailed picture by ourelves I like how sensei main point tuffed into expresing psyhologically characters their emotions and encountering with each other till end ~ uh good one for those who like deep confusing painful twisted but romantic yaoi piece :3
I think you should edit your comment to replace the first paragraph with an apology so you don't sound like a judgemental jerk. You don't know how old the readers are nor their capacities to analyze a story.
I'm 25 and was dissatisfied with Kazuomi's development in the end. I understood Shuuji and whatever else. But it's as if once he loses the school funds and Shuuji says he'll give him the funds and his life, Kazuomi accepts him either because of the school funds or because he's now alone and has nothing else. I don't like that. It's not sweet nor touching nor intense. Just makes him seem pathetic.
Also as someone else said, facial expressions were drawn with little to no emotion. Makes the characters and reader feel detached.
I will not answer seprately to everyone cause I don't have time. o I'll answer just yours and it means for all those 'felthearted' comments above.
Firstly everyone who got offended by my post just proved that are brats. And I am suprised that you with 25 years says such things.
At first with meaning 'BRATS' I cathegorized everyone who ISn'T READY nor UNDERSTANDABLE enough of life, manga, this genre, people's emotions and psyhology, leaving real age behind. And then I stated about kids and underage.
There are people who can understand such complicated emotons in 14th year and yet there are people who can't understand it even in their 30th or 50h year of life, sadly.
As for you, I think you should reread manga and look deeper into their characters and reasons and emotions, and sensei wanted that from readers by such drawing ith less expressions. this is syhological manga it' isn't comedy slice of life or shounen where expressions are important. each genre has it's own features and ou can't make everyone do same things especially authors of manga.
As for both of them you took the story too easy, their relationship isn't that shallo. I hpe you can understand their emotions and reasons after rereading or maybe reading more of such stuff and understanding varous people's characters and moods and life cirumanities also way of expressing themself.
Unfortunately, you still don't seem to get that point that Lenalena, and others were making. People are going to have their opinions and they're going to differ from yours. To immediately go into such a condescending and negative reply was very special snowflake/brat like/lalalala I can't hear you...because I liked this, so Goddammit, EVERYONE will like this!!!!!! I mean look at how you started this response, lmao! I don't need to, nor anyone else who has read this manga and already formed their opinion on it; read it again. I was already following it and rereading the chapters after each new chapter came out anyway. I understand perfectly what this story was trying to go for and I think it failed in its execution! IMO, it was a terribly put together manga, with bad characters, weak side characters, a weak back story, and a romance that doesn't come off as believable. It doesn't negate the fact that I like some of this mangakas other works, but that does not affect my opinion on this particular title. You only want people to reread the manga simply because you want them to see your opinion, without acknowledging the opinions of others. It doesn't work that way.
YAOI I WANTED AT MOMENT!!!!! XDDD goshhh THANK YOU Sakurai-sensei!!!!! I PISSED MY PANTS XDDD THIS IS YAOI BRATS!!! gosh I miss such good old jewels of yaoi genre for lifting daily stress and enjoy bishies fapping lemonating and making me laugh with all that mess chara unusual weird stories and abnormally hot lewd but so damn funny scenes XDDD
JUNGLE KING yeah absolutely!!! <3 gosh I like all stories esp that one of company :3 UKE ADMITS HE WANTS TO BE CHASED DOWN ! yeah that's it *Q*~~~ but that 45 deegrees shaped place between his balls.. goshhh 'tarzan' and his bellowed really won me over XDD I can't stop laughing! greatt funnnyyy sexyyy fast crazy yaoi uhh rereading it again XD
goshh <3 MY CUP OF TEA!!! <3 HOT SWEET SHMEXY FUNNY CLUMSY POSSESSIVE YAOIESS ROMANTIC a bit DRAMATIC and HOOOOT <3333 wonderful! and COMPANY goshhh SUITS <3 I LIKE ALL CHARA x3 and even uke was sooo adorable even if I don't like clumsy sleazy types but this was justt sooo YAOI <3 goshh I like this old and funny shmexyness <3 new yaoi can't compare to this *Q*~ gosh I miss old times ><
yeah... this was way more twisted wicked abusive dramatic and broken than I imagined sequel to be.. but it also lifted totally bad atmosphere of ending in prequel.. *O*
I really can read this in viewpoint of those who like and understand such sick violence and love under 'who knows what will happen next..' circumanities when seme can't control himself nor uke in their lust for each other and s&m corners of sanity.... but still I hope Miyako won't be shit till end and will know how to treasure Toma from now on in terms that any other part of body won't be missing there x.x
but stil I can't understand how Toma can simply ignore fact that Miyako tossed his arms.. even if it's out of love this is too much for me I can't get over prequel still x..x but I liked this one and ending was beautiful x3 I just am sadist maybe that I wished for Miyako to be ravished more by Ituki.. <3 goshhhh I so likeee LOVEADORE hen seme is pushd down!!! especially such one sick and proud to the core as Miyaki XD .. acctually maybe threesome for me would be better fareell party for me at ending as this.. xP
as for burning passion etc.. it as there but too much and driwen to the really sick points where humans need to stop themself to not look stupid.. I think I hate most Miyako out of all chara for making Toma into what he's now.. but I guess this is what Mika-sensei ;likes to bring out from main chara in such kind of her stories.. so for those who don't like love out of angst and sickness and too much man's burning passion and possesiveness.. this isn't for you :)
ok brats stop napping here 'rape' 'rape' like broken cd. T_T you're so annoying. do you know at all what 'rape' means? gosh nowdays kids just say this word whatever they see that they don't understand nor like in intercourse and especially in yaoi. T_T those aren't girls , for the sake of and you aren't knights to protect 'holy place' of potential uke. T_T I am so annoyed of nowdays readers of yaoi it's like this genre became lost case.
First in 2nd story was so much more passion, love, emotions, sorrow, hope, faith, sadness and sensual way of expressing between them than in any other story here. It was strong and at one point sick when seme couldn't stop his despair separating it from driven mind to corner of sanity and reality, and just made love to the boy who got mixed his feelings so much his memories and scar that he tried to mask all this time by his cold hardboiled cool image. and boy also understood his pan and just accepted him he didn't rant so it can't be considered rape. rape is when one onesidely and selfpleasurely against other partner's utmost will, go into sex just to satify carnal desires.
this was speaking between two men. it wasn't rape in that context. it wasn't out of free will ofcourse but it was consensual because seme and uke felt each other and drowned their pain and emotions into healing both of them.
such yaoi as this story isn't for brats who can';t understand complex feelings of adults and dramatic love and yaoi story at all. this is fictional made with strong feelings and deep heartfull emotions from both parties which can't be expressed with words but just through body contact and then through actions. it's like chef-d'oeuvre. good dramatic romance clishe yaoi of old times - it can be called.
if you want something just seet and not that real to to yaoi go read shounen ai.
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btw where is 4th chapter? o.o
I saw a rape scene and I must say I'm not a brat.
Does it bother me? Not as much as I would like to, but I'm now accustomed to that trope.
Why is it rape? Although you made a deep and interesting interpretation of the story, there were actions that showed us it wasn't consensual:
-Use of force: adult hitting the boy
http://www.mangago.zone/read-manga/hisuiiro_no_kaze/mrs/manga/hisuiiro-no-kaze/v-1/2/38/
-Use of sleeping pills (drugs!).
http://www.mangago.zone/read-manga/hisuiiro_no_kaze/mrs/manga/hisuiiro-no-kaze/v-1/2/39/
-Victim telling him to stop.
http://www.mangago.zone/read-manga/hisuiiro_no_kaze/mrs/manga/hisuiiro-no-kaze/v-1/2/40/
As it is a trope, it doesn't matter at the end of the sexual intercourse if it was or wasn't rape, the boy was more worried about the rapist than about himself and used a common statement in yaoi manga's rape:
"You seem to be in more pain that I am...".
And there you go, the pain both felt "justified" his actions and the other scenes banished with the romantic feelings that would come in the next pages.
I don't like to rant about that trope (and I think I've never done it), because I might sound like an hypocrite because I've enjoyed countless manga with it (and felt disgusted at other more. However, I'm still waiting for well portraited rape scenes and victims with traumas and so... O.O).
But I don't mind if others do so, because it shows that people are troubled by it as it should be in real life.
What I mind is when people treat it so lightly and it's not clear if they are mature enough to understand the fictional Vs reality situation (I'm saying this because that's what worries me, but not because I think you are like that, so please don't think this last words were directed to you).
At the end I saw rape.
I think you are trying to comprehend the story from the story itself and that's why you got to the conclusion that it wasn't, but thinking it from a normal and real context, I wouldn't doubt to call it rape.
It also makes me think about how in real life rape's thought of, a lot of times victims are the ones called at fault, "the rapist wasn't doing anything wrong" or "the victim is overreacting". Those misunderstandings are awful because it determines if a criminal is punished or not... And even if victims are aware of it or not.
I understand your point of view but in this case you're wrong.
firstly about those scenes in manga you presented and clarified as presentation of rape.. Sorry but the BOY has brought it up himself. he WAS aware of seme being unstable after that thing on the beach when he lost bracellet yet he acted like nothing happened. that ofcourse pissed already mindconfused seme which wounds of past activated.
2nd he just could went of his room and not come there.
I think people are too protecetive of those they called 'being raped' when they acctually initially didn't want to prevent it. I mean it in yaoi. we are tallking about guys. guys esspecially straight ones won't admit their love or attraction to someone from the same sex sweetly and peacefully in most cases especially adult ones.
you need to separate girls from boys.
and what sleeping pills.. o.o I don't find anything wrong with that it's not a drug or afrodisiac or opium. seme didn't want him to hurt. and gosh those are boys it's nothing to be overreacting about..
this wasn;t rape since rape as I mentioned is onesidely and angsty or abusive or forceful way of pleasuring itself uing other party without caring about. uke could prevent this if he wanted and we can CLEARLY see that uke liked from the start seme (when he found out about him being novelist and taking time later on with him etc..).
also yaoi manga and reality is different as you say also. making a fuss over it is weird and what you said that it can be interpreted wrong way in reallity that's why I said IT ISN'T FOR BRATS or those who don't understand commonity of proper life.
those who read yaoi at least it was before, were 'adults' not by age but also by understanding so there wasn't need to explain such simple obvious things. yaoi and fujoshi culture is different.
also like rape in yaoi and real life and in hetero relationships.
you need to learn that reading yaoi and mixing real life with it is totally uncalled for thing, which only brats who didn't get proper clue of this genre get in.
I am not reffereing to you but to 'you' in all for everyone.
also when I read manga I read manga, yeah it has refference in real life and on characters with actions and personalities reffering to real life persons and we can learn much from it but I differate reality when it comes to this - story to be more passionate and deep and making it like that on base of various hmm 'brutal'? things.. especially romantic yaoi like this need such twisted things for story. not to justify something or not, but to bring characters and their stories to readers. this is OLD YAOI shedevre. it always showed no borders in passionate and complicated realtionship between men. those who fail to understand and enjoy it just don't have right to read this and annoy other readers with pointless comments about nothing. *o*
btw sorry for mistakes if I made english isn't my native ><
the definition of rape is to have sexual intercourse without the consent of the other party. that means if you drug some one and then sleep with them that is rape i do agree that the word rape is thrown around too much but after reading your comment it makes me wonder if you know what rape is also men can be raped by other men and by women
this is old but I need to comment. I'm 38 years old and that was a rape scene plan and simple. men do get raped too ok. and not only by men but by women too. rape is not a yaoi thing. rape is common in all mangas/animes genres. and also games, for consoles, pcs, etc, etc. Japan has the highest rape culture worldwide. japanese society learned that rape was a hideous crime less than 170 years ago, after the meiji restoration. and to this day many japanese men still have the archaic beliefs and see rape like nothing bad at all, oh yes before the meiji restoration rape and other sexual crimes was accepted. in japan anything that makes a dick raise up and milk it,
is accepted without a care about the well being of women and men. this is sad true of japan, and they do everything to keep it under the rug. most manga/animes fans doesn't know at all Japan's history and its dark side.
it seems that the brat here it is you. you simply made a whole bullshit excuse of your own fucked up point of view to defend a classic rape scene. you call brats those who pointed out the lame rape. when the real brat is you and the one who doesn't see the real problem behind it is you. kid grow up because mentally you still have a teen mind and a veeery fucked up view.
goshhh soooo muchhh everything !!! I can't take it Harada-esnseiii >_< <3333 goof hardcore ffunny but dramatic sad sick but happy www Tata and Momo are such an heart' couple <3