Does anyone wanna continue the first story? You don’t have to if you don’t want to, but I’m curious to see how others decide to end it, since it ended very abruptly.
Sample template: After the foreigner left her, [insert your own ending here].
(I went a little crazy here, and you don’t have to make it as detailed as mine, but you are free to do so. I apologize in advance for my shitty writing lmao.)
Here’s mine:
After the foreigner left her, Yukino tried to figure out why he left with only a note saying “I love you.” Even though the sex was amazing, she didn’t really have the same feelings towards him. He was a complete stranger, and there’s no way her feelings for him would go beyond physical attractiveness. Besides, he left her. She decided to throw it away and carried on with her life. There were nights where she couldn’t stop thinking about him though. Then after about 5 months, the bell rang. It was him.
He was smiling, and said “Hello!!”
Yukino slammed the door on him.
“W-why is he here?!”
Her head was racing with thoughts. And then she realized he was still outside. She opened the door again, only to bombard him with her pent up confusion.
“I’m sorry, but.... what is wrong with you? First you leave me with a simple “I love you” note and then come back after 5 whole months? Did you think I would wait for you or something??”
He looked like a beaten down puppy and told her, “I am truly sorry. I know I don’t have the right to, but I seriously missed you. I wanted to see you so badly, you have no idea. So... can we please talk?”
She paused for a while then finally sighed.
“Sit down, I’ll get you some tea.”
Just as she was about to go prepare tea, he pulled her into a warm embrace. “I don’t need tea, I need you.”
Taken aback, the girl chuckled.
“Smooth talker.”
With that being said, they made love to each other. After they both finished, the guy explained everything that had happened. About why he left, that he was learning to speak the same language as Yukino, and how difficult it was for him to live without her. He also confessed to Yukino that he fell for her at first sight, and asked her if they could start dating. She told him that it was too soon for them to be dating, so she asked if they could start as friends.
After another 5 months of being friends, she realized she had fallen in love with him and had been denying her feelings for too long. She clearly conveyed this to the foreigner. Needless to say, they became a happy couple.
The End.
This is an exquisite and intricate work of art unlike any I have ever seen before. It makes me wonder how long the author took to produce a work with quality of such a high degree. I must note that simply saying “Hi” to someone can create many different scenarios, but most will not actually occur, because the world is cruel and exists to stomp all over your parade. Therefore, the girl, symbolizing the world, exemplifies the notion to not have any expectations because they will ultimately and eventually lead to utter despair and disappointment. You must be meticulous with how you phrase your greetings, because one mistake could lead to downfall, including your integrity and wellbeing as a human. Instead, you must communicate in cohesive sentences that depict exactly the way you are feeling as to oppose the cruel world while at the same time, invite them in. Extremely well written and drawn. I look forward to their future works.
I’ve never been more fine before in my entire life until I read this manga. This manga has completely changed me as a person, and I feel as if my intelligence has become exceptionally heightened due to how brilliant this work is. This work is definitely not something a genius should read because their head will definitely explode with how creative and thought-inducing it is.
Please help me.
Hurts me to see Noah belittling himself like that. You are not only his lover, you are so much more than that. Love yourself first and recognize your self-worth!