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How is this story so annoying?? Both the cousins suck, one has severe anger issues and the other is a sociopath. Sodam is dumb but he deserves better, neither of the guys are redeemable.
Also, can people stop writing BDSM stories with characters that don't even really like it??? He was pressured into it from the beginning which is supposed to be 100% against BDSM ideology(idk what phrasing to use). BDSM should require enthusiastic consent, and when guys are legit violent they shouldn't be doing it at all