beta
This was really underwhelming. It looked like MC finally started developing feelings but then they already dropped the truth just like that? I was expecting the truth to appear when he truly feels like he was in love or something. And the “chase” was ass, he forgave him way easily over such an asshole move, ML didn’t even try to convince MC to take him back all he did was drink his sorrows away and MC came back to him instead. Writing just felt completely stiff the whole time and it just felt really rushed. I really tried to like this but I just can’t